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Array ( [sid] => 15517 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => another chance [time] => 2003-04-04 00:25:00 [hometext] => my uncle's dying... and im wishing for a miracle where he can see another day, and more days after that, that he'll be okay. [bodytext] => i wish people could have a second chance,
to make things okay.
to cheat death and escape one more time,
to live to see another day.

in sweet maddness,
all this glory and saddess.
to watch the sun rise one more time,
to see the moon shimmiering down.

to walk another day with the one you love,
to be held in their arms, to hold them.
to cheat death and escape for one more day,
its everything that one could say.

to spend all your time waiting,
for the time where you can have that second chance.
so close to death you wonder,
for a distraction to keep you alive.

memories seep through yor veins,
for a second chance to be weightless,
to see another day,
faceless.

from this darkness in your eyes,
from the distance that you feel.
just to have that second chance to wish,
to have just one more generous meal.

everything keeps on twisting,
good to bad, it doesnt make a difference.
to escape one more time, its all in the end.
you think you're okay, but then, your not...

to fall to my knees and pray.
to pray to the god above, to the clouds.
that they can have just one more chance,
to see the sunrise to a new day.

i wish people could have another chance,
people that deserve that chance.
people that love, and are loved.
I hope they can have another chance.
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another chance

Contributed by frozensuicide on Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 12:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



i wish people could have a second chance,
to make things okay.
to cheat death and escape one more time,
to live to see another day.

in sweet maddness,
all this glory and saddess.
to watch the sun rise one more time,
to see the moon shimmiering down.

to walk another day with the one you love,
to be held in their arms, to hold them.
to cheat death and escape for one more day,
its everything that one could say.

to spend all your time waiting,
for the time where you can have that second chance.
so close to death you wonder,
for a distraction to keep you alive.

memories seep through yor veins,
for a second chance to be weightless,
to see another day,
faceless.

from this darkness in your eyes,
from the distance that you feel.
just to have that second chance to wish,
to have just one more generous meal.

everything keeps on twisting,
good to bad, it doesnt make a difference.
to escape one more time, its all in the end.
you think you're okay, but then, your not...

to fall to my knees and pray.
to pray to the god above, to the clouds.
that they can have just one more chance,
to see the sunrise to a new day.

i wish people could have another chance,
people that deserve that chance.
people that love, and are loved.
I hope they can have another chance.




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Re: another chance (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 09:35:07 AM AEST
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I wish to,its rough not seeing my mom again!
My heart goes out to you & my prayers! So sad!
Christina


Re: another chance (User Rating: 1 )
by nightrider on Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 03:48:55 PM AEST
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great write as always nic... i know how much he means to you... i really hope he gets that second chance... i hope we all do...


Re: another chance (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 05:36:26 PM AEST
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Great write!! Hey..sometimes they do have a second chance.... Hang on to that hope... Your uncle will have that chance,....
Jenni




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