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During our conversations you said you knew how I felt, but did not understand why
Let me try to explain what I see as I look at you through my eyes

Through my eyes I see the lady filled with beauty, compassion, poise, passion and love

From within you glows a beauty that shines for the world to see
This is a beauty that many people fail to see
You possess a compassion and caring for those in need
It is a driving force of your personality indeed

Your poise comes from your inner strength that has carried you through
All of the rough times that the world and life has thrown at you
Your goals you have set to achieve show the passion you hold
Never give up on them and remember on some days you need to be bold

There burns within you the desire to be loved as you love, total and complete
When you meet this person the world will shake beneath your feet
This is the complete lady I visualize when it is you that I see
Even though you have never stood right in front of me


Deadwriter
11/19/2009

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Through My Eyes

Contributed by deadwriter on Friday, 20th November 2009 @ 05:30:38 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Through My Eyes

During our conversations you said you knew how I felt, but did not understand why
Let me try to explain what I see as I look at you through my eyes

Through my eyes I see the lady filled with beauty, compassion, poise, passion and love

From within you glows a beauty that shines for the world to see
This is a beauty that many people fail to see
You possess a compassion and caring for those in need
It is a driving force of your personality indeed

Your poise comes from your inner strength that has carried you through
All of the rough times that the world and life has thrown at you
Your goals you have set to achieve show the passion you hold
Never give up on them and remember on some days you need to be bold

There burns within you the desire to be loved as you love, total and complete
When you meet this person the world will shake beneath your feet
This is the complete lady I visualize when it is you that I see
Even though you have never stood right in front of me


Deadwriter
11/19/2009





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Re: Through My Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Alexa_Bachtel on Friday, 20th November 2009 @ 05:59:01 PM AEST
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Cool poem. This is really that beauty which every woman got. And I liked that you see not only external beauty, but also internal. A rare copy of the man, very rare, alas.
Good work. Alexa.


Re: Through My Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 20th November 2009 @ 06:29:56 PM AEST
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Very lovely. Who is the lucky girl?


Re: Through My Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by longhaircg on Friday, 20th November 2009 @ 08:07:29 PM AEST
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oh yes lucky girl indeed, such a beautiful read
sp


Re: Through My Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 20th November 2009 @ 08:19:01 PM AEST
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Very creative, beautiful and alluring to the reader.
Awesome work.
blessings, smiles,
emy


Re: Through My Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 24th November 2009 @ 03:28:13 PM AEST
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very very pretty and a strong compelling write...

hugs n' love nessa


Re: Through My Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 25th November 2009 @ 12:21:14 PM AEST
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Somewhere out there.....there is one lucky lady to have this written to her by you....
I hope those conversations continue and she makes you happy....
Hugs
Jenni




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