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A misleading appearance to hide the storm inside

I feel so restless, yet I am standing still
Hoping and wishing and drawing on my will

I have been strong for far too long, curbing every whim
But now every nerve inside me aches to be with him

I know the facts haven't changed they remain the same
But each day my longing burns with a brighter flame

I am still clueless, we cannot be together just yet
Its hard to believe its been years since we last met

At times it gets too much and I cry
But I must be strong and I know why

I wake up each day knowing this deep in my heart
Each day away from you,is a day less that we are apart [comments] => 3 [counter] => 294 [topic] => 48 [informant] => pooja [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

HOLDING ON

Contributed by pooja on Monday, 30th November 2009 @ 11:21:12 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

My head is abuzz, but I am calm outside
A misleading appearance to hide the storm inside

I feel so restless, yet I am standing still
Hoping and wishing and drawing on my will

I have been strong for far too long, curbing every whim
But now every nerve inside me aches to be with him

I know the facts haven't changed they remain the same
But each day my longing burns with a brighter flame

I am still clueless, we cannot be together just yet
Its hard to believe its been years since we last met

At times it gets too much and I cry
But I must be strong and I know why

I wake up each day knowing this deep in my heart
Each day away from you,is a day less that we are apart

Copyright © pooja ... [ 2009-11-30 23:21:12]
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Re: HOLDING ON (User Rating: 1 )
by hopelezz on Monday, 30th November 2009 @ 11:32:18 PM AEST
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it hurts when we wake up each day the 1 we love most was not there to hold you...

stay strong always...

nice poem...

-hopelezz

Re: HOLDING ON (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 1st December 2009 @ 10:01:11 PM AEST
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Oh gosh .. I can't even begin to explain the gravity of emotion
that befalls me upon reading this. There is incredible familiarity
here. Wonderfully written and so damn emotive. Well done!

~ Breezy

Re: HOLDING ON (User Rating: 1 )
by NightMareShoGun on Monday, 15th October 2012 @ 01:40:15 AM AEST
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stay strong great poet

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