Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	02-June 18:55:35 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 1556 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => THE END? [time] => 2002-08-01 13:25:43 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I cant help what you did to me
I try each day to forget the past
but memories of the hateful things
keep coming to mind too fast

I know you say your sorry
and I know you mean it well
but once you hurt someone
the hurt is deep cant you tell?

You were the one that did this
you tore our hearts apart
forgetting and forgiving
is where I have to start

If its over then its over
and we must say goodbye
even though you broke my heart
I will love you till I die

I dont know what to tell you
but no matter what comes our way
I will always remember the love
we shared from that very first day
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 200 [topic] => 32 [informant] => PS_iloveyou [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

THE END?

Contributed by PS_iloveyou on Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 01:25:43 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I cant help what you did to me
I try each day to forget the past
but memories of the hateful things
keep coming to mind too fast

I know you say your sorry
and I know you mean it well
but once you hurt someone
the hurt is deep cant you tell?

You were the one that did this
you tore our hearts apart
forgetting and forgiving
is where I have to start

If its over then its over
and we must say goodbye
even though you broke my heart
I will love you till I die

I dont know what to tell you
but no matter what comes our way
I will always remember the love
we shared from that very first day

Copyright © PS_iloveyou ... [ 2002-08-01 13:25:43]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: THE END? (User Rating: 1 )
by ginsdance on Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 01:44:23 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I remember coming to this part of my relationship with Ryan. I loved him like crazy... but I couldn't trust him anymore. Thanks for sharing this, it was something that I needed tonight!
Ginsdance

Re: THE END? (User Rating: 1 )
by chatabox on Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 07:54:20 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

just too sad....it can be the hardest thing in the world to do, to forgive someone. I hope they realise what they have lost.

lovely write.

Re: THE END? (User Rating: 1 )
by doc on Saturday, 3rd August 2002 @ 03:39:32 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

wow...been there..done that...deeply moving..wonderful write

Re: THE END? (User Rating: 1 )
by Cypher on Monday, 5th August 2002 @ 03:34:58 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Sometimes forgiveness can be freeing, and can help mend a broken heart... for both the forgiven and the one doing the forgiving.
But sometimes forgiveness makes a person think.... "well... I got away with it last time...."
some things should never be forgiven and some pains never forgotten.
I wish you luck and hope those pains are not visited upon you again. Cypher

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com