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Falling behinde...every minute of the way.
I need some guidence,please.You just dont understand.
I try,but dont succeed.I'm a hopeless child it seems.
I can never impress you,even though I try..I'm failing every minute of my miserable so called life. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 198 [topic] => 43 [informant] => KarinaGutierrez121 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

No Title At The Current Moment

Contributed by KarinaGutierrez121 on Friday, 4th December 2009 @ 04:38:58 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

The plague that spreads through my veins.
Falling behinde...every minute of the way.
I need some guidence,please.You just dont understand.
I try,but dont succeed.I'm a hopeless child it seems.
I can never impress you,even though I try..I'm failing every minute of my miserable so called life.

Copyright © KarinaGutierrez121 ... [ 2009-12-04 16:38:58]
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Re: No Title At The Current Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by Aspirant on Friday, 4th December 2009 @ 06:37:37 PM AEST
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There's a lot of pressure on kids these days to be successful in school. I would offer this simple advice: think of things in terms of being happy. Find out what makes you happy and go for it. Sometimes there will be conflicts between 2 things that make you happy, like living up to your parents' expectations and spending your time doing other things (like writing a poem). If you think this way, you'll realize there's no point in getting down or depressed, and you'll be able to strike a balance that makes you a happier person. That's my 2 cents, anyway.

Re: No Title At The Current Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Friday, 4th December 2009 @ 10:17:14 PM AEST
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Writing is a great way of getting rid of stress and frustration and you have expressed yourself very well in this poem keep writing

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