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Array ( [sid] => 155648 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => False Suicide [time] => 2009-12-05 22:45:36 [hometext] => This is a false suicide story about love,hate,pain, and freedom or separation from the real world. [bodytext] => A guy comes home… happy as always…

talks to his fam b/c thats all he truly has anyways…



jumps on his computer b/c that's one thing he's good @

tryin to live and make a diff b/c that's truly where his hearts @

he sits and thinks why am I here

but quickly realizes that., well thats not important



watches a lil TV to seetle his head

but constantly he keeps thinking man why do I feel so none-important



he looks for no answers cause all it will bring is more hurt

so he get a rope, twist once not even realizing how much its goin to hurt



he ties off the 3rd floor, so he knows itll be quick

he says "I love you family", but I think im sick



He's sick of lies, and sick of pain

He' sick of ppl always being fake, and he always the blame



He cries a cry that only his one friend hears

And he backs away b/c he knows Gods always going to be there…

he wants this to stop… please let him be

so... he quckly dries his eys… hits the lights... and falls asleep




By: someone [comments] => 0 [counter] => 137 [topic] => 36 [informant] => casanova [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
False Suicide

Contributed by casanova on Saturday, 5th December 2009 @ 10:45:36 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



A guy comes home… happy as always…

talks to his fam b/c thats all he truly has anyways…



jumps on his computer b/c that's one thing he's good @

tryin to live and make a diff b/c that's truly where his hearts @

he sits and thinks why am I here

but quickly realizes that., well thats not important



watches a lil TV to seetle his head

but constantly he keeps thinking man why do I feel so none-important



he looks for no answers cause all it will bring is more hurt

so he get a rope, twist once not even realizing how much its goin to hurt



he ties off the 3rd floor, so he knows itll be quick

he says "I love you family", but I think im sick



He's sick of lies, and sick of pain

He' sick of ppl always being fake, and he always the blame



He cries a cry that only his one friend hears

And he backs away b/c he knows Gods always going to be there…

he wants this to stop… please let him be

so... he quckly dries his eys… hits the lights... and falls asleep




By: someone




Copyright © casanova ... [ 2009-12-05 22:45:36]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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