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Array ( [sid] => 155679 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Leave With Me My Perfect Dream [time] => 2009-12-06 22:12:50 [hometext] => The manifestaion of thoughts formed by the absence of my true love. The racing and thinking of a lonely mind as it forms hope. [bodytext] => All the days that pass without you
Left me dreaming thoughts about you
Form the perfect situation
Reveal me now my minds creation
Us alone upon a hill
Wind is flowing quiet still
Flakes of snow upon your face
Slow our hearts begin to race
That’s all I need a pretty day
Me and you a special place
Not a soul to tell us no
Hold me close and don’t let go
In your arms I start to cry
Tears are streaming from my eyes
Not of sorrow hate or pain
Happy tears begin to rain
All the things I ever wanted
Everything I've ever wanted
Give to me a nothing more
From my heart love starts to pour
All I have is yours to take
All my hope is yours to make
You don’t know how long I've waited
All the worlds I have created
Searching for the perfect one
There with you the perfect one
I wish that we could live forever
Always we would be together
Once upon a time it ends
Pleading questions I will send
Maybe maybe he might hear me
I really really hope he hears me
Please just let us stay forever
Do not separate us never
If my wish remains ungranted
Still I want this life enchanted
Time I have I want with you
Short is life our love is true
Never might I have my dream
Perfect thought my perfect dream
Always will I love you always
Always love me please say always
A love with you my everything
A life with you my everything
A day with you my everything
A single second spent with you
Is better than a thousand lives
Without you with me
I need you with me...
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Leave With Me My Perfect Dream

Contributed by redmurcury on Sunday, 6th December 2009 @ 10:12:50 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



All the days that pass without you
Left me dreaming thoughts about you
Form the perfect situation
Reveal me now my minds creation
Us alone upon a hill
Wind is flowing quiet still
Flakes of snow upon your face
Slow our hearts begin to race
That’s all I need a pretty day
Me and you a special place
Not a soul to tell us no
Hold me close and don’t let go
In your arms I start to cry
Tears are streaming from my eyes
Not of sorrow hate or pain
Happy tears begin to rain
All the things I ever wanted
Everything I've ever wanted
Give to me a nothing more
From my heart love starts to pour
All I have is yours to take
All my hope is yours to make
You don’t know how long I've waited
All the worlds I have created
Searching for the perfect one
There with you the perfect one
I wish that we could live forever
Always we would be together
Once upon a time it ends
Pleading questions I will send
Maybe maybe he might hear me
I really really hope he hears me
Please just let us stay forever
Do not separate us never
If my wish remains ungranted
Still I want this life enchanted
Time I have I want with you
Short is life our love is true
Never might I have my dream
Perfect thought my perfect dream
Always will I love you always
Always love me please say always
A love with you my everything
A life with you my everything
A day with you my everything
A single second spent with you
Is better than a thousand lives
Without you with me
I need you with me...




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Re: Leave With Me My Perfect Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by longhaircg on Monday, 7th December 2009 @ 07:07:51 AM AEST
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this is a beautiful dream of love and hope good writing
sp


Re: Leave With Me My Perfect Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Monday, 7th December 2009 @ 07:42:32 AM AEST
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Yes this is very beautiful.

Take care




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