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[aid] => mick
[title] => Disappear
[time] => 2009-12-08 23:20:11
[hometext] => please comment on this I think it came out okay, let me know what you think.
[bodytext] => Disappearing into the blur The lights seem to fade as though running away No matter what it will be okay The hardness of its skin as it brakes through Shredding the kind and gentle Pulled up only to stumble You can only imagine the rumble Here they come tearing down the side The heat felt like the prick of a thorn upon my neck The blast of light has only means of bad news We burst of the place to set our pace as fast as rockets shooting up to the sky We got so high only to come back down When landed swaying back and forth as though in a hammock Watching the stars glaze Connecting the dots seemed so much simpler now Everything ends with the blur of the world in my palm all connected. [comments] => 0 [counter] => 133 [topic] => 43 [informant] => jjayjay25 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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