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The sun never shines in my world, it always rains. The rain always falls heavy, like tears, crying. Crying for me, crying for everyone in my world. Then we cry. We cry for the dear, sweet rain that feels our pain. Its so sweet to cry for us.
I do have a love in this world. A sad, longing invisible love. His name is pain, sorrow, and depression. I love my invisible love. He knows me, he loves me and understands me.
I love my invisible love, and my world, my world that is dark and sad, my world in my head, so much because it all I know to love. I know not anything else to call mine, to love, to understand. I'm nieve.
This world is for me and people like me. Me and people like me alone. We welcome you with open arms. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Desi [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

My World

Contributed by Desi on Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 04:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

In my world, everybody would be like me. Dark, Sad, and Gray.
The sun never shines in my world, it always rains. The rain always falls heavy, like tears, crying. Crying for me, crying for everyone in my world. Then we cry. We cry for the dear, sweet rain that feels our pain. Its so sweet to cry for us.
I do have a love in this world. A sad, longing invisible love. His name is pain, sorrow, and depression. I love my invisible love. He knows me, he loves me and understands me.
I love my invisible love, and my world, my world that is dark and sad, my world in my head, so much because it all I know to love. I know not anything else to call mine, to love, to understand. I'm nieve.
This world is for me and people like me. Me and people like me alone. We welcome you with open arms.

Copyright © Desi ... [ 2003-04-05 04:05:00]
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Re: My World (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 01:52:07 PM AEST
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This is so sad, so deep. I hope that you find other things to love too.
Charlotte
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Re: My World (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 06:50:03 PM AEST
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Very sad Desi, There is alot more to life than what you see, I have a dark soul, but I still know life dosent end there.
I liked your poem as it showed another way life is veiwed, thank you for sharing your heart felt sorrow.

Re: My World (User Rating: 1 )
by full_blur on Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 03:59:03 PM AEST
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"Its so sweet to cry for us"
this line is great
I like this poem a lot. I hope you become happier, but on the otherhand, depressed people make the best poetry...

Re: My World (User Rating: 1 )
by luischahin on Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 07:57:07 PM AEST
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i like it a lot, it has strength it shows how alone we are, even if we have friends and family, we are alone here, it really shows a mean when you write about sadness and depresions, keep on that good work
luis

Re: My World (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 10:35:53 PM AEST
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Nice write...tho I'm not a fan of dark poetry...
Jenni

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