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Array ( [sid] => 155916 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I cant think of anything more positive then you [time] => 2009-12-14 11:39:07 [hometext] => Your face, heart, smile, curves and hair [bodytext] => WHy am i still thinking about you? And spending so many thoughts
thinking about you? I try doing other things, but why do i try explayning
it to you? I try to clear my mind of thoughts, but no matter where,
you always appear. Its so tiresome telling you all these feelings.
If i just could hold you, i wouldent care about tomorrow.
I will miss you so much, you have no idea how happy you make me.
My heart is besy, thinking about you. I cant think of anything more
positive then you. I look down in the floor and you only appear
brighter. I cant stop thinking of your face, its just too beautifull.
I will miss you so much, and my feelings in my stomach goes nuts.
Your beautiful hair in the air, and your curves and smile is a myth.

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I cant think of anything more positive then you

Contributed by Marc_HJSP on Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 11:39:07 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

WHy am i still thinking about you? And spending so many thoughts
thinking about you? I try doing other things, but why do i try explayning
it to you? I try to clear my mind of thoughts, but no matter where,
you always appear. Its so tiresome telling you all these feelings.
If i just could hold you, i wouldent care about tomorrow.
I will miss you so much, you have no idea how happy you make me.
My heart is besy, thinking about you. I cant think of anything more
positive then you. I look down in the floor and you only appear
brighter. I cant stop thinking of your face, its just too beautifull.
I will miss you so much, and my feelings in my stomach goes nuts.
Your beautiful hair in the air, and your curves and smile is a myth.

By Marc Foder

Copyright © Marc_HJSP ... [ 2009-12-14 11:39:07]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I cant think of anything more positive then you (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 12:02:00 PM AEST
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A heart wrenching account of love lost to the sky above..
very touching, thankyou.....
Star x x x

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