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And you shut your eyes
Your heartbeat slows
And a part of you dies

Your soul begins to burn
And your body starts bleeding
Your mind begs for death
Screaming at you, ever so pleading

You feel the disgust
The destructive hate
You open your eyes
For you know your fate

All hope is gone
No one will care
As the blade crosses your throat
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As the Light Falls

Contributed by fallensaint on Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 07:32:22 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

As the light falls
And you shut your eyes
Your heartbeat slows
And a part of you dies

Your soul begins to burn
And your body starts bleeding
Your mind begs for death
Screaming at you, ever so pleading

You feel the disgust
The destructive hate
You open your eyes
For you know your fate

All hope is gone
No one will care
As the blade crosses your throat
Your blink becomes stare

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Re: As the Light Falls (User Rating: 1 )
by Voice of the Silent on Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 08:03:18 PM AEST
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Let me be the first to welcome you to the site,
Great poem you should post the other ones you got in that notebook :)
Hope to read more soon
-not like I have to tell you
-Kelly

Re: As the Light Falls (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 08:50:40 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.

This is a well written verse, filled with sadness I felt thick in the room around me.
Though I do not like to touch base much on suicide type poems........

I will watch for more of your work...

Peace
Michelle

Re: As the Light Falls (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Tuesday, 15th December 2009 @ 01:23:53 AM AEST
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Very well written.

Take care

Re: As the Light Falls (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 15th December 2009 @ 02:45:39 PM AEST
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Poets are like actors, living out a plot
but you'll know for sure how close they are
to the flame when you feel the burn.
Despair is a dark place your words do not contracict.
Well written!

-D.Truth

Re: As the Light Falls (User Rating: 1 )
by ChaosFactor on Monday, 28th December 2009 @ 08:23:38 AM AEST
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I like the way you use imagery.. I can really see what you're saying. I know the feeling, but take care.

Re: As the Light Falls (User Rating: 1 )
by brittany24 on Tuesday, 29th December 2009 @ 05:35:37 PM AEST
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wow love this poem.I have felt this way a time or two. keep up the good work.

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