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Array ( [sid] => 155930 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Paradise Lost [time] => 2009-12-14 21:14:34 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I'm a fun boy one
who's become a shadow
and now
I am just a face
in the crowd....
my spirits is broken
my hearts been shattered,
I shiver and shake
as I slowly breakdown.

I'm in love with love
but
love don't love me,
Love always leaves
after
it comes on so strong.
I keep pretending
that it doesn't matter
but still I wait
for the one to come.

I'm gonna fall in love again
although
I don't wanna,
I can't explain it
I just know that it's true.
I shiver and shake
and I
tremble and moan,
because I don't know what else to do.

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 75 [informant] => unknown_utopia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 17 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

Paradise Lost

Contributed by unknown_utopia on Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 09:14:34 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

I'm a fun boy one
who's become a shadow
and now
I am just a face
in the crowd....
my spirits is broken
my hearts been shattered,
I shiver and shake
as I slowly breakdown.

I'm in love with love
but
love don't love me,
Love always leaves
after
it comes on so strong.
I keep pretending
that it doesn't matter
but still I wait
for the one to come.

I'm gonna fall in love again
although
I don't wanna,
I can't explain it
I just know that it's true.
I shiver and shake
and I
tremble and moan,
because I don't know what else to do.

Copyright © unknown_utopia ... [ 2009-12-14 21:14:34]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Paradise Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 09:44:46 PM AEST
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The title is what drew me to this and Im glad I stopped in to read.
Deeply moving poem.
Though darn sad, whats up with everyone being sad? I think it is floating in the air everywhere.

Hugs
Michelle

Re: Paradise Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Tuesday, 15th December 2009 @ 01:21:17 AM AEST
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Well written, very moving .

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