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Array ( [sid] => 155988 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wipe Your Feet [time] => 2009-12-16 09:34:12 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You walk into my world, expecting me to bow
Though I may appease you, you only win for now
I will not play the martyr--you, the lowly folk
Every claim of modesty has surely been a joke
Your vanity bestows an arrogance inside
Ready? Here we go again: hold on for your life
This coaster never ends, this ride is never through
Funny how they hate me when they're really hating you
Every wound I've had, you dug right in
Telling me I was your friend
I don't believe the lies you speak
Or the way you feel as if you're weak
I don't believe you've come this far
Without another to take your arm
I don't believe you'll make it through
Without someone else protecting you
I don't believe you'll last a day
Without this wicked sin of shame
I don't believe you're who you say
I don't believe you'll never change
I do believe you're withering and weak
Afraid to walk further with the likes of me
I do believe you know I'll be the one
To show the world what you've become
I do believe that you've collapsed
I don't believe you can take it back
I do believe that you're a fake
For still you claim you're not afraid
When deep inside, it surely shows
There's no place left for you to go
So from out of the corner, you thrash into this life
Hoping and praying you'll come out of this fight
So march into my world and ***** on my throne
My kingdom is the only place you've left to go
But if you're going to play amidst my royal court
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Wipe Your Feet

Contributed by satanssecret1369 on Wednesday, 16th December 2009 @ 09:34:12 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



You walk into my world, expecting me to bow
Though I may appease you, you only win for now
I will not play the martyr--you, the lowly folk
Every claim of modesty has surely been a joke
Your vanity bestows an arrogance inside
Ready? Here we go again: hold on for your life
This coaster never ends, this ride is never through
Funny how they hate me when they're really hating you
Every wound I've had, you dug right in
Telling me I was your friend
I don't believe the lies you speak
Or the way you feel as if you're weak
I don't believe you've come this far
Without another to take your arm
I don't believe you'll make it through
Without someone else protecting you
I don't believe you'll last a day
Without this wicked sin of shame
I don't believe you're who you say
I don't believe you'll never change
I do believe you're withering and weak
Afraid to walk further with the likes of me
I do believe you know I'll be the one
To show the world what you've become
I do believe that you've collapsed
I don't believe you can take it back
I do believe that you're a fake
For still you claim you're not afraid
When deep inside, it surely shows
There's no place left for you to go
So from out of the corner, you thrash into this life
Hoping and praying you'll come out of this fight
So march into my world and ***** on my throne
My kingdom is the only place you've left to go
But if you're going to play amidst my royal court
Wipe your feet at the ***** door




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Re: Wipe Your Feet (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 16th December 2009 @ 11:04:12 AM AEST
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This was far from unconvincing
I don't sense any one could rise to this occasion without some battles lost
"You walk into my world, ecpecting me to bow"
Quite an entrance
chilling, sinister, and very black

-D.Truth


Re: Wipe Your Feet (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Wednesday, 16th December 2009 @ 05:50:12 PM AEST
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Gosh, I'd hate to meet you in a dark alley lol!
Seriously though, this is a superbly dark and provocative poem.
Very well written
Star x x x


Re: Wipe Your Feet (User Rating: 1 )
by Libertina on Friday, 18th December 2009 @ 05:31:36 AM AEST
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Yeah I liked it, too, but anyway, I'd recommand you to leave some gaps between some verses if you get me ;), that would really make it far easier to read and enjoy the poem...

Libertina


Re: Wipe Your Feet (User Rating: 1 )
by eeeitak on Saturday, 19th December 2009 @ 03:50:53 PM AEST
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this is very cool, very emotional. i love it!




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