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Array ( [sid] => 156009 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Un-Break My Heart [time] => 2009-12-17 00:56:39 [hometext] => Miracles happen - and blind begins to see clearly [bodytext] => You gotta leave all your words
Right at the door together with your shoes,
Cos it is not what I need right now.
I know where you been and where you came from,
Also I know you got pocketful of an excuses
But are you sure that I wanna hear it out.

Can you do me a favor?
Can you un-break my heart right now?
Why would I need your words
If they full of sense you do not mean
Can you do this to me?
Can you undo this pain you might cause,
Without spelling the things you want,
Cos we know what's gonna be after that
So just be quiet and un-break my heart.

Everything was pretty good from the start,
Cos it was going according to you scheme
As you always wanted to look the best in my eyes,
And for the time being I was believin' in that,
But miracles happen - and blind begins to see clearly
It was enough to notice your wedding ring
Your plan was perfect, but also there were blanks,
But, probably, you know that you got caught up.

Can you do me a favor?
Can you un-break my heart right now?
Why would I need your words
If they full of sense you do not mean
Can you do this to me?
Can you undo this pain you might cause,
Without spelling the things you want,
Cos we know what's gonna be after that
So just be quiet and un-break my heart.

Nevertheless, you were bit of James Bond,
Though that's exactly what I loved in you,
But your mission's terminated in a failure,
So just save your both breath and words,
They're gonna be necessary to you
When you'll explain your girl where you been.
And now...

Can you do me a favor?
Can you un-break my heart right now?
Why would I need your words
If they full of sense you do not mean
Can you do this to me?
Can you undo this pain you might cause,
Without spelling the things you want,
Cos we know what's gonna be after that
So just be quiet and un-break my heart. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 313 [topic] => 56 [informant] => Alexa_Bachtel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => sarcasticpoetry )
Un-Break My Heart

Contributed by Alexa_Bachtel on Thursday, 17th December 2009 @ 12:56:39 AM in AEST
Topic: sarcasticpoetry



You gotta leave all your words
Right at the door together with your shoes,
Cos it is not what I need right now.
I know where you been and where you came from,
Also I know you got pocketful of an excuses
But are you sure that I wanna hear it out.

Can you do me a favor?
Can you un-break my heart right now?
Why would I need your words
If they full of sense you do not mean
Can you do this to me?
Can you undo this pain you might cause,
Without spelling the things you want,
Cos we know what's gonna be after that
So just be quiet and un-break my heart.

Everything was pretty good from the start,
Cos it was going according to you scheme
As you always wanted to look the best in my eyes,
And for the time being I was believin' in that,
But miracles happen - and blind begins to see clearly
It was enough to notice your wedding ring
Your plan was perfect, but also there were blanks,
But, probably, you know that you got caught up.

Can you do me a favor?
Can you un-break my heart right now?
Why would I need your words
If they full of sense you do not mean
Can you do this to me?
Can you undo this pain you might cause,
Without spelling the things you want,
Cos we know what's gonna be after that
So just be quiet and un-break my heart.

Nevertheless, you were bit of James Bond,
Though that's exactly what I loved in you,
But your mission's terminated in a failure,
So just save your both breath and words,
They're gonna be necessary to you
When you'll explain your girl where you been.
And now...

Can you do me a favor?
Can you un-break my heart right now?
Why would I need your words
If they full of sense you do not mean
Can you do this to me?
Can you undo this pain you might cause,
Without spelling the things you want,
Cos we know what's gonna be after that
So just be quiet and un-break my heart.




Copyright © Alexa_Bachtel ... [ 2009-12-17 00:56:39]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Un-Break My Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Thursday, 17th December 2009 @ 12:59:20 AM AEST
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well written.

Take care

Can you do me a favor?
Can you un-break my heart right now?
Why would I need your words
If they full of sense you do not mean
Can you do this to me?
Can you undo this pain you might cause,
Without spelling the things you want,
Cos we know what's gonna be after that
So just be quiet and un-break my heart.




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