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Array ( [sid] => 156015 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ~The saddest of sad goodbyes~ [time] => 2009-12-17 08:26:55 [hometext] => After waking with these feelings, I had to carve them out from my new dreams of starting over!! Like it, hate it let me know!! [bodytext] => The snow covers up your,
eternal resting place still,
somehow I know that,
your are not cold!
My eyes bleed out thinking
of you some days, not knowing
what to do, but yet I carry on,
listening to another’s love song.
A new song plays in life, our song,
rewinds now lost deep,
in the hands of time resting,
where it now belongs .
Rest now, my sweetest best friend,
I will always love you till my end.
Sleep the eternal sleep, dream of
me, remember our love will,
always Stand and embrace,
the sunshine of summer times.
Before I forget,
thank you for talking to
God, and sending me my new angel,
to quicken me again.
This write is to say,
good bye my love,
I thank you again,
without feeling,
your loving memory
I would have never,
picked up my pen again.
God speed to you,
on your new journeys.
Your loving husband
stuck somewhere between,
Heaven and Hell,
Jeff……
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~The saddest of sad goodbyes~

Contributed by inkmaster on Thursday, 17th December 2009 @ 08:26:55 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

The snow covers up your,
eternal resting place still,
somehow I know that,
your are not cold!
My eyes bleed out thinking
of you some days, not knowing
what to do, but yet I carry on,
listening to another’s love song.
A new song plays in life, our song,
rewinds now lost deep,
in the hands of time resting,
where it now belongs .
Rest now, my sweetest best friend,
I will always love you till my end.
Sleep the eternal sleep, dream of
me, remember our love will,
always Stand and embrace,
the sunshine of summer times.
Before I forget,
thank you for talking to
God, and sending me my new angel,
to quicken me again.
This write is to say,
good bye my love,
I thank you again,
without feeling,
your loving memory
I would have never,
picked up my pen again.
God speed to you,
on your new journeys.
Your loving husband
stuck somewhere between,
Heaven and Hell,
Jeff……
Inkmaster (C) 12/2009

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Re: ~The saddest of sad goodbyes~ (User Rating: 1 )
by longhaircg on Thursday, 17th December 2009 @ 08:48:28 AM AEST
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again you have another beautifully writen poem I love your writing thankyou
your friend
sp

Re: ~The saddest of sad goodbyes~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Thursday, 17th December 2009 @ 09:40:27 AM AEST
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Honest this i think is one of your best i have read
full of emotion ,sad but also beautiful

Take care

Re: ~The saddest of sad goodbyes~ (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 17th December 2009 @ 07:03:25 PM AEST
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Oh this is a touching verse, nicely written.
The ending so profound.

Michelle

Re: ~The saddest of sad goodbyes~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Taizy_May520 on Friday, 18th December 2009 @ 08:36:46 PM AEST
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Wow, this is an amazing poem. So much heart and soul in it. I'm so very sorry for your loss.

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