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Array ( [sid] => 156062 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dead inside [time] => 2009-12-18 18:16:16 [hometext] => Well not much to say. Hope you like it [bodytext] => The blade
It stings
As it tears across flesh
My dying soul sings

A stab to my heart
A wound that won't heal
Death by love
I never thought it was real

It's killing me
A slow and painful death
Love tore me apart
And extinguished my last breath

I'm dead inside
An empty shell
I am lost forever
Burning in hell

But don't say sorry
Or give me excuses
You have shown me
I am entirely useless [comments] => 5 [counter] => 342 [topic] => 39 [informant] => fallensaint [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

Dead inside

Contributed by fallensaint on Friday, 18th December 2009 @ 06:16:16 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

The blade
It stings
As it tears across flesh
My dying soul sings

A stab to my heart
A wound that won't heal
Death by love
I never thought it was real

It's killing me
A slow and painful death
Love tore me apart
And extinguished my last breath

I'm dead inside
An empty shell
I am lost forever
Burning in hell

But don't say sorry
Or give me excuses
You have shown me
I am entirely useless

Copyright © fallensaint ... [ 2009-12-18 18:16:16]
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Re: Dead inside (User Rating: 1 )
by inkmaster on Friday, 18th December 2009 @ 08:42:32 PM AEST
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Nice write,
writen from the heart I liked it ....
~Inkamster~

Re: Dead inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Voice of the Silent on Friday, 18th December 2009 @ 09:12:24 PM AEST
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I've said all I have to say to you about the blade,
the red pen of pain we call it cutting on your skin
but you aren't useless not at all, what you feel and what is true are to different things, you're not useless, if you were aaron wouldn't have wasted time even opening my door to yell at you, he yelled because he cared and that should show you you're not useless

all the same Great poem
hope to read more soon
-Kelly

Re: Dead inside (User Rating: 1 )
by rfburn on Sunday, 20th December 2009 @ 05:20:32 AM AEST
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Wow Dude. Don't take it so hard. You'll find another one.

Re: Dead inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Taizy_May520 on Sunday, 20th December 2009 @ 07:54:13 PM AEST
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Very powerful! I loved it!

Re: Dead inside (User Rating: 1 )
by SilentMuse on Saturday, 26th December 2009 @ 11:47:22 AM AEST
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You are not useless, you have good friends, you fill a space in are hearts and lives no one else can, if nothing else, remeber that

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