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Array ( [sid] => 156158 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Final Goodbye [time] => 2009-12-22 10:01:07 [hometext] => One of my good friends has just lost her brother. So I devote this poem to the one who has lost somebody. Hold on, be strong and remember that in the place they're in, they feel better than the did here. [bodytext] => This is always unbelievably hard
When you're losing someone
You love by all your your heart
When he's gone for good to the place
Where you believe he'll feel better
Than he did here.

You wish you could turn back time
And get the chance to say goodbye
Tears on your eyes turn into river
As you find it's too late for it,
And someone you love has passed away
So you'll never get another chance
To say the things that were unspoken
Because all hopes got gone with him
And all that's left is just
To say your final goodbye.

This is always unbelievably hard
To kiss the forehead of your beloved
And in the same time understand
That it's gonna be your last kiss
Before you see him last time
And his eyes will be shut forever
Yes, life is unfair, but that's life
Taking away from us the ones we love.

You wish you could turn back time
And get the chance to say goodbye
Tears on your eyes turn into river
As you find it's too late for it,
And someone you love has passed away
So you'll never get another chance
To say the things that were unspoken
Because all hopes got gone with him
And all that's left is just
To say your final goodbye.

Yes, the death as worst as it gets,
There is nothing worst than understanding
That someone you love has passed away
There is nothing worst than this.
They say that parents shouldn't survive their kids,
The lovers swear: "Till the death tears us apart",
But what if the death comes ahead of time,
What if the person dies before the time.
From the knife in a back, from the heart attack,
Or in own bed in an environment of a family,
The death is always death,
And it doesn't make the pain weaker,
It doesn't make the tears dry on their own,
You just need to think, yes you do need
That he's in the best world.
So just say goodbye,
Your final goodbye...

You wish you could turn back time
And get the chance to say goodbye
Tears on your eyes turn into river
As you find it's too late for it,
And someone you love has passed away
So you'll never get another chance
To say the things that were unspoken
Because all hopes got gone with him
And all that's left is just
To say your final goodbye. [comments] => 0 [counter] => 147 [topic] => 39 [informant] => Alexa_Bachtel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 22 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
Final Goodbye

Contributed by Alexa_Bachtel on Tuesday, 22nd December 2009 @ 10:01:07 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief



This is always unbelievably hard
When you're losing someone
You love by all your your heart
When he's gone for good to the place
Where you believe he'll feel better
Than he did here.

You wish you could turn back time
And get the chance to say goodbye
Tears on your eyes turn into river
As you find it's too late for it,
And someone you love has passed away
So you'll never get another chance
To say the things that were unspoken
Because all hopes got gone with him
And all that's left is just
To say your final goodbye.

This is always unbelievably hard
To kiss the forehead of your beloved
And in the same time understand
That it's gonna be your last kiss
Before you see him last time
And his eyes will be shut forever
Yes, life is unfair, but that's life
Taking away from us the ones we love.

You wish you could turn back time
And get the chance to say goodbye
Tears on your eyes turn into river
As you find it's too late for it,
And someone you love has passed away
So you'll never get another chance
To say the things that were unspoken
Because all hopes got gone with him
And all that's left is just
To say your final goodbye.

Yes, the death as worst as it gets,
There is nothing worst than understanding
That someone you love has passed away
There is nothing worst than this.
They say that parents shouldn't survive their kids,
The lovers swear: "Till the death tears us apart",
But what if the death comes ahead of time,
What if the person dies before the time.
From the knife in a back, from the heart attack,
Or in own bed in an environment of a family,
The death is always death,
And it doesn't make the pain weaker,
It doesn't make the tears dry on their own,
You just need to think, yes you do need
That he's in the best world.
So just say goodbye,
Your final goodbye...

You wish you could turn back time
And get the chance to say goodbye
Tears on your eyes turn into river
As you find it's too late for it,
And someone you love has passed away
So you'll never get another chance
To say the things that were unspoken
Because all hopes got gone with him
And all that's left is just
To say your final goodbye.




Copyright © Alexa_Bachtel ... [ 2009-12-22 10:01:07]
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