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Not knowing where I'm going, not knowing where I'm at

All these lonely years with no one by my side

Wondering if anyone would notice if I lived or if I died

On this deep, dark path bearing no place to go

Holding one person close to my heart, more then she'll ever know

Spending all these years living with my past

Trying to forget it now, trying to forget it fast.

The past comes back to haunt me

From time to time i find

To realize its just the past

And I need to leave it all behind

Spending all these years on this long and lonely street

Wondering when our paths will cross, wondering when they'll meet

I walk through my life wondering, if its worth saving or letting go

In the end i just tell myself, time can only show.

So i keep on going down this long and lonely path

Till i reach the time where my life comes to and end

And our paths have crossed and i have a eternal friend

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Long and Lonely Path

Contributed by XslainhopeX on Wednesday, 23rd December 2009 @ 03:45:22 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Spending all these years on this long and lonely path

Not knowing where I'm going, not knowing where I'm at

All these lonely years with no one by my side

Wondering if anyone would notice if I lived or if I died

On this deep, dark path bearing no place to go

Holding one person close to my heart, more then she'll ever know

Spending all these years living with my past

Trying to forget it now, trying to forget it fast.

The past comes back to haunt me

From time to time i find

To realize its just the past

And I need to leave it all behind

Spending all these years on this long and lonely street

Wondering when our paths will cross, wondering when they'll meet

I walk through my life wondering, if its worth saving or letting go

In the end i just tell myself, time can only show.

So i keep on going down this long and lonely path

Till i reach the time where my life comes to and end

And our paths have crossed and i have a eternal friend

Copyright © XslainhopeX ... [ 2009-12-23 03:45:22]
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Re: Long and Lonely Path (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Wednesday, 23rd December 2009 @ 07:42:13 AM AEST
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Well written.

Take care

I walk through my life wondering, if its worth saving or letting go

In the end i just tell myself, time can only show.

So i keep on going down this long and lonely path

Till i reach the time where my life comes to and end

And our paths have crossed and i have a eternal friend

Re: Long and Lonely Path (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Wednesday, 23rd December 2009 @ 07:49:01 AM AEST
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This is so nicely written, full of heartache,
but still hope lies within its words.
Well done
Star x x x

Re: Long and Lonely Path (User Rating: 1 )
by Voice of the Silent on Thursday, 24th December 2009 @ 01:17:23 AM AEST
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Nicely written
Often we never know where we are or where we are going until we get there, so it is good you found a friend to was the way with you
each day you walk the path remember one thing
Carpe diem, but I'm guessing you know that
Anyways Great write
hope to read more soon
-Voice

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