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Chocolate feelings
Contributed by
turab
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Tuesday, 19th January 2010 @ 12:02:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I loved a chocolate A chocolate i never got It could only be asked for. Not bought
I asked the chocolate to be mine It said no!! All my dreams were shattered And my hopes started to get low
There came a candy As another option Without thinking, I took it With hopes that it would help In painful situations
The candy became mine But things weren't just fine I and my heart were in a serious debate Because i still longed for my love my chocolate
I had taken the candy And i had to be faithful to it So i tried to forget the chocolate But it was like skipping a heart beat
Chocolate The word surrounding my mind Seeming so simple Yet divine
It was my mistake My wrong decision I had to stay with the candy While my heart drowned in the Chocolate's vision
Then came a day I and the candy were no longer together Everything was over
Now! i was able to think about My chocolate my chocolate only And not be faulty
But, the chocolate liked some one else Not me she also had feelings that I could not see
She was with him Her gye I was alone with one question Why?
The person i longed for Was gone Everything was over Pain was reborn
Surrounded by thoughts Confusion in my head There i stood alone Waiting... Waiting for my Chocolate
Author: Turab Allani
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2010-01-19 12:02:28] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Chocolate feelings
(User Rating: 1 ) by fallensaint on
Wednesday, 20th January 2010 @ 07:39:47 AM AEST (User
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wow amazing write!!!!! I know how it feels....
It's painful but sometimes it all works out in the end.
I hope it works out for you |
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Re: Chocolate feelings
(User Rating: 1 ) by jenniferstein2006 on
Thursday, 21st January 2010 @ 10:05:10 PM AEST (User
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fantastic |
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