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No Smile Upon Me
Contributed by
dbl0jen
on
Saturday, 23rd January 2010 @ 12:48:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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My life's a state of mass confusion.
Never ever safe and sane.
It seams my life's just one big game.
Even so, it's all the same,
and living it means no great gain.
Except for maybe sorrow and strife.
My life these days, like a double edged knife.
Either way it cuts me deep,
Leaving wounds, slow to heal
and long to weep.
I feel dispair creeping in.
My face rarely wears that familiar grin
that everyone so likes to see,
the smile they associate with me.
A chore these days it seams to be,
finding reasons to wear it, inside of me.
Empty, hollow, cold as stone.
Everyday I feel more alone.
Without you near, each day I fear.
that my sorrow and lonliness
will be too much to bear.
I cannot see how long it will be
Before you and I, can again become we.
Until that day, wrapped in my shroud I shall be.
Covered in sadness,
No smile upon me.
Copyright ©
dbl0jen
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2010-01-23 12:48:55]
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Re: No Smile Upon Me
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by Jarod on
Saturday, 23rd January 2010 @ 07:12:52 PM AEST
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| Great job putting your feelings into words. A good recipe to your mindset. |
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Re: No Smile Upon Me
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by Fuzzy on
Sunday, 24th January 2010 @ 12:00:25 AM AEST
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Very well written, you can feel the pain
and frustration.
Take care Fuzzy
My life these days, like a double edged knife.
Either way it cuts me deep,
Leaving wounds, slow to heal
and long to weep.
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