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[title] => SAD ETERNITY
[time] => 2010-01-28 23:53:11
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[bodytext] => I’m almost out of time, Feeling caught up in a bind, I can’t even move with all this ***** on my mind. Where did I go wrong? What could I have done? I never for a second doubted that you were the one. We were so happy, Always without a care, There never ever was a time that I wasn’t there. This is so unfair, I can still smell your hair, I’ve got to do something cuz this pains too much to bear. Weed doesn’t help, And neither does the booze, I could’ve sworn that I was winning; I never thought that I would lose. Love must be for fools, And I’m the biggest one, I wanted to spend my life with you and for us to have a son. More than one, I wanted two, But now there’s nothing I can do, were through. So I must now go about my life, Faking little smiles at people left and right, And never again do I want to go through all this strife. Never again will I want to make a girl my wife. Because when you left you took all the love from my life. Now I’m just a shell, A body living in the hell, Of lost opportunities unable to accel. And this is how it will be, A sad eternity, Just waiting for the fateful day where I will never breathe. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 22 [informant] => BONEZ [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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