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Array ( [sid] => 157457 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lost in Depression [time] => 2010-02-11 23:22:51 [hometext] => [bodytext] => It obliterates my mind and consumes my actions
i cant tolerate a feelin of this kind....it tears me apart in fractions
So i sit and i dwell
I stare off like im under a spell
my mind swells
due to this stress...this mess
due to its restaints I cannot progress
Like an unpassable test....
Or a deep pain in my chest...in my heart is rests
Worry...
Doubt...
Anger...
It all varies
but then it all turns back to this affliction
In my soul it is carried
Like an addiction
I cant let it go no matter how hard i try
Sometimes I wanna jus break down to my knees and cry
But I stand for as long as i can
Time slippin through my fragile hands
It always gets the best of my moral
God knows I long to be the woman that everyone wants me to be
but words inflict these thoughts that beat through my ear canal
and it blinds my vision...so the good i dare not see
truth is....
Im lost in my depression
derailed in my repression
will i ever get out..
damn......
thats a good question
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 25 [informant] => msconception [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )
Lost in Depression

Contributed by msconception on Thursday, 11th February 2010 @ 11:22:51 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



It obliterates my mind and consumes my actions
i cant tolerate a feelin of this kind....it tears me apart in fractions
So i sit and i dwell
I stare off like im under a spell
my mind swells
due to this stress...this mess
due to its restaints I cannot progress
Like an unpassable test....
Or a deep pain in my chest...in my heart is rests
Worry...
Doubt...
Anger...
It all varies
but then it all turns back to this affliction
In my soul it is carried
Like an addiction
I cant let it go no matter how hard i try
Sometimes I wanna jus break down to my knees and cry
But I stand for as long as i can
Time slippin through my fragile hands
It always gets the best of my moral
God knows I long to be the woman that everyone wants me to be
but words inflict these thoughts that beat through my ear canal
and it blinds my vision...so the good i dare not see
truth is....
Im lost in my depression
derailed in my repression
will i ever get out..
damn......
thats a good question




Copyright © msconception ... [ 2010-02-11 23:22:51]
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Re: Lost in Depression (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 12th February 2010 @ 10:11:15 AM AEST
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I really the unique structure to this poem. Flowing with pain and bouncing question marks of when will the page turn to better days. Well written.

take care
duff


Re: Lost in Depression (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 12th February 2010 @ 09:07:31 PM AEST
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I felt each moment in this flowing verse.
I liked the style of it to.

I relate to this, and get it, having never been bitten and sucked into the darkness of depression before it is a struggle.....

I think the past year did a number on many.
Here is a wish for better and brighter days to come for you and for all. It will be better we will all be fine! Take care of you

Hugs Love N Peace
Michelle




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