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Array ( [sid] => 157506 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Little Jar of Magic [time] => 2010-02-15 15:38:05 [hometext] => In memory of anyone who had lost their life due to drugs. I've done my share of drugs in the past but now with the help of a close friend, I'm turning over a new leaf so this won't ever happen to me. [bodytext] => Little jar of magic,
I found you when I was blue.
You lured me in with your beautiful design
And your enchanting aroma.
Little jar of magic,
I kept you by my side.
I gripped you tight
So none could take you from me.
Little jar of magic,
One peek inside of you
Could make me smile
And fill me with joy.
Little jar of lies,
What have you done?
Last night, I opened you,
And now I'm covered in blood.
Little jar of lies,
I can't move a muscle.
I can't see a thing.
I can't hear a word.
Little jar of lies,
I can't swallow a crumb.
I can't breath anymore.
I can't live.
Little jar of lies,
You've killed me. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 229 [topic] => 66 [informant] => Rykor [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => drugabuse )

Little Jar of Magic

Contributed by Rykor on Monday, 15th February 2010 @ 03:38:05 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

Little jar of magic,
I found you when I was blue.
You lured me in with your beautiful design
And your enchanting aroma.
Little jar of magic,
I kept you by my side.
I gripped you tight
So none could take you from me.
Little jar of magic,
One peek inside of you
Could make me smile
And fill me with joy.
Little jar of lies,
What have you done?
Last night, I opened you,
And now I'm covered in blood.
Little jar of lies,
I can't move a muscle.
I can't see a thing.
I can't hear a word.
Little jar of lies,
I can't swallow a crumb.
I can't breath anymore.
I can't live.
Little jar of lies,
You've killed me.

Copyright © Rykor ... [ 2010-02-15 15:38:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Little Jar of Magic (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlightKiss on Tuesday, 16th February 2010 @ 10:55:38 AM AEST
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I love this. It definitely
symbolizes the fake
sense of security that
drugs provide. Great job

Re: Little Jar of Magic (User Rating: 1 )
by SunshineySam on Thursday, 19th August 2010 @ 08:00:47 PM AEST
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Definitely reminds me of how flashy and alluring the party scene is at first. And then it goes downhill from there once you get sucked in. awesome write.

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