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[aid] => mick
[title] => Driving Home
[time] => 2002-08-01 21:29:59
[hometext] => This is just a poem for someone that I love. I'm in my twenties, but real love is very new to me. This is really the first poem I've written on the topic so I don't know how good it is, but I felt the need to express these feelings somehow... so I wrote this poem.
[bodytext] => At dusk I am in the passenger seat of your car
And you lean against the door, light a cigarette. The sun is orange, slipping And it must be in your eyes. Will you stay? Will I stay? Will we not fall apart like sheathes of wet paper Will we not come apart like everything else? You move in the summer air And I breathe in as you exhale, Perfect against a concrete landscape, Perfect against a dusty sky. You are in my veins, Better than any drug. You are in my mind, my nervous mind, Comforting it out of its coma. You flow through me lighter than gravity But I can’t hold on tight enough And I’m scared that you will slip. I am not whole but I hope some day to be; You help fill up the cracks in my soul. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 2 [informant] => skinny-little-punk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
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