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Array ( [sid] => 157700 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Travel [time] => 2010-02-23 11:37:43 [hometext] => I have not gotten much feed back on this poem so please tell me what you think. [bodytext] => Lost in the woods,
No where near home.
I've been tying for days to get back home.
I've climbed every mountain that’s gotten in my way,
And I've prayed to God,
day after day.
Still I travel waiting till
the day I can see your loving face again.
If I can ever find my way back home,
I swear to God,
I will never again leave you alone.
I left on a plane for business affairs,
then the plane I was on was shot out of the air.
I was the only one of the crew to survive,
though with all the pain I longed to die.
Your face alone is what kept me going,
and with all the pain flowing through me,
none of with can keep me from thy.
I'll travel for days on end,
until I see your loving face again.
I travel these barren lands,
looking for help from any sort of man.
I've eaten wild plants to live,
and to get to you my very soul I would give.
With my undying love I have for you,
I will never stop till I stand next to you.
And if I die before I see your sweet face,
I will haunt this world till me and you together stand at the pearly gates.
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Travel

Contributed by DarkWolf on Tuesday, 23rd February 2010 @ 11:37:43 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



Lost in the woods,
No where near home.
I've been tying for days to get back home.
I've climbed every mountain that’s gotten in my way,
And I've prayed to God,
day after day.
Still I travel waiting till
the day I can see your loving face again.
If I can ever find my way back home,
I swear to God,
I will never again leave you alone.
I left on a plane for business affairs,
then the plane I was on was shot out of the air.
I was the only one of the crew to survive,
though with all the pain I longed to die.
Your face alone is what kept me going,
and with all the pain flowing through me,
none of with can keep me from thy.
I'll travel for days on end,
until I see your loving face again.
I travel these barren lands,
looking for help from any sort of man.
I've eaten wild plants to live,
and to get to you my very soul I would give.
With my undying love I have for you,
I will never stop till I stand next to you.
And if I die before I see your sweet face,
I will haunt this world till me and you together stand at the pearly gates.




Copyright © DarkWolf ... [ 2010-02-23 11:37:43]
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Re: Travel (User Rating: 1 )
by AngelFox on Tuesday, 23rd February 2010 @ 09:15:50 PM AEST
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I got nothing to say on this one except, "excellent"!




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