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all of the girls that I love don't feel the same way about me.
What kind of hell is this,
are you shining upon my your unholy bliss?
I asked my self every night,
what can I do to make this right?
Why can't I find my love?
Has she already died and gone above?
Or is she still here?
Just not all that near.
When will we meet?
Will it be after a great defeat.
Have me already met?
But we just do not know it yet.
I'm sure my luck will turn,
I've got a few down and some more to burn.
I just can't let my self get down,
I can't go through this life with a frown.
But what will I do,
till the day I finely find you?
Shall I sit in bed and cry?
Shall I give up my life and die?
NO! I will not let the bastards of the world get to me.
Cause I don't want to be a train wreck when you finely find me. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 271 [topic] => 32 [informant] => DarkWolf [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Before I Found You

Contributed by DarkWolf on Thursday, 25th February 2010 @ 05:22:11 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

How oh God did you do this to me,
all of the girls that I love don't feel the same way about me.
What kind of hell is this,
are you shining upon my your unholy bliss?
I asked my self every night,
what can I do to make this right?
Why can't I find my love?
Has she already died and gone above?
Or is she still here?
Just not all that near.
When will we meet?
Will it be after a great defeat.
Have me already met?
But we just do not know it yet.
I'm sure my luck will turn,
I've got a few down and some more to burn.
I just can't let my self get down,
I can't go through this life with a frown.
But what will I do,
till the day I finely find you?
Shall I sit in bed and cry?
Shall I give up my life and die?
NO! I will not let the bastards of the world get to me.
Cause I don't want to be a train wreck when you finely find me.

Copyright © DarkWolf ... [ 2010-02-25 05:22:11]
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Re: Before I Found You (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Thursday, 25th February 2010 @ 05:41:17 AM AEST
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nice write, can feel the frustration in this.

well written
Take care
Fuzzy

Re: Before I Found You (User Rating: 1 )
by longhaircg on Thursday, 25th February 2010 @ 08:59:34 AM AEST
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hang in there, love will find you, I believe this for me too, the when and where is ?
SP

Re: Before I Found You (User Rating: 1 )
by thistle_and_fern on Thursday, 25th February 2010 @ 09:50:40 AM AEST
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The elusive looking for love thing, sometimes I think we look to hard so we dont find it, when we stop lookin,g this is usually when it happens.

Smile because you never know who is just around the corner.

Heartfelt poem. Enjoyed it.

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