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any at all,sorrow burden, tell me your tale,page
unfold,pain that you hold,Tear drop as ink lay
on each page,words speak to me,be kind tell
me a lie,of life free of my sin,let my eyes read
a chapter of hope,give me a passage,so i can
crawl in,shut reality out,tell me a story of love
so True, yes now please lie to me,hide within
the words,Take me to a world,where peace of
mind resides,please now just tell me a lie, of
sweet life, then let me be, close the cover, let
me then stay,never to ever open again.

~ Let me be in Chapter of Hope~
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Chapter of Hope

Contributed by Fuzzy on Tuesday, 2nd March 2010 @ 07:27:04 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Silence, so sweet, so sad, love lost, or never had
any at all,sorrow burden, tell me your tale,page
unfold,pain that you hold,Tear drop as ink lay
on each page,words speak to me,be kind tell
me a lie,of life free of my sin,let my eyes read
a chapter of hope,give me a passage,so i can
crawl in,shut reality out,tell me a story of love
so True, yes now please lie to me,hide within
the words,Take me to a world,where peace of
mind resides,please now just tell me a lie, of
sweet life, then let me be, close the cover, let
me then stay,never to ever open again.

~ Let me be in Chapter of Hope~

Copyright © Fuzzy ... [ 2010-03-02 07:27:04]
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Re: Chapter of Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by longhaircg on Tuesday, 2nd March 2010 @ 07:34:34 AM AEST
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Oh I want to go here also so sweet and keep me there awsome write
SP

Re: Chapter of Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by girish on Tuesday, 2nd March 2010 @ 07:53:07 AM AEST
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you have lost hope from your mind. your hope resides there not outside. happiness or sorrow both are in your mind tame it and be happy

Re: Chapter of Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Tuesday, 2nd March 2010 @ 09:25:04 AM AEST
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Shut reality out!,hide, close, never to open,give me any other world other than the painful reality I live in, shut me in a book of fantasy, very sad write

Re: Chapter of Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by thistle_and_fern on Tuesday, 2nd March 2010 @ 09:47:54 AM AEST
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"give me a passage that I can crawl in."

Sometimes it would be good to be able to crawl into a chapter of a book,
" close the cover, never to ever open again"

but having said that, by being open, we let people read and to also enjoy the book of us and to value us as people, as nice as it would be to hide.

Really felt the pain in this one, well written, speaks of hurt and of wanting the walls to build around to prevent hurt entering again.
'let me be".

Re: Chapter of Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Tuesday, 2nd March 2010 @ 12:32:08 PM AEST
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I LOVE this poem! it is so true. I feel this way all the time. you have penned these feelings and thoughts so well. my favorate part has to be "be kind tell me a lie, of life free of my sin, let my eyes read a chapter of hope, give me a passage, so i can crawl in, shut reality out, tell me a story of love so true.." eh..na..the whole thing is awsome..my favorate part is the whole thing. it's beautifull through and through.

Re: Chapter of Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 4th March 2010 @ 01:50:32 PM AEST
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Sadness wrapped in a warm blanket. This is delicate and beautiful with a hovering darkness. Well written.

take care
duff

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