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Array ( [sid] => 15797 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => A Death Tale [time] => 2003-04-12 00:25:00 [hometext] => and I fell in love with a Valkerie [bodytext] => In a masquerade I stood, cold, by the sea and the shining moon
Soon a radiant jewel passes in the fainted light where she swooned
Embellishing the air with fragranced desire, and my heart with croon
Where danceth her nocturnal beauty in visions dimmed and pruned

Mistress of the dark, I know not what thou art!
Yet waketh in me a lustful sin
Dragged out of stillness straight to my heart
With cruel moonlight upon yer skin

To the forest so black did I follow
Her footprints carved in snow
Walking like a sleepless hollow
Finally I see her beauty glow

"Nocturnal Queen, my heart beats for thee
Let me see thine face, lower your mask to me"

She lulled me away of what I did say
Gently sealing my lips with hers
…and murmured me a kiss
Desire urged by her sweetest spurs
Feelings adrift in a darker abyss

- "My love doth speak with voices unheard
Emotions say more then a thousand word"

In the forest misted lawn, where stone figures forlorn
Hath she once again faded
And her spell upon me broke
I sought refuge in a cemetery, jaded
Enfolded myself in a black cloak

In the pale morning sun, did my last breath run
I tore free of my sleep sepulture
To see her standing by me
"Hath I been waken by yer sweet lure?
Move thine delecate lips and answer me"

- "Your soul hath long been wasted
With misery waiting to be solved
Now your end hath hasted
And your death evolved"

- "You and I are together but one time
Though your heart felt lust for me
Rest again peacefully in a silence sublime
I'll be your angel, your Valkerie".
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A Death Tale

Contributed by Opium on Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 12:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



In a masquerade I stood, cold, by the sea and the shining moon
Soon a radiant jewel passes in the fainted light where she swooned
Embellishing the air with fragranced desire, and my heart with croon
Where danceth her nocturnal beauty in visions dimmed and pruned

Mistress of the dark, I know not what thou art!
Yet waketh in me a lustful sin
Dragged out of stillness straight to my heart
With cruel moonlight upon yer skin

To the forest so black did I follow
Her footprints carved in snow
Walking like a sleepless hollow
Finally I see her beauty glow

"Nocturnal Queen, my heart beats for thee
Let me see thine face, lower your mask to me"

She lulled me away of what I did say
Gently sealing my lips with hers
…and murmured me a kiss
Desire urged by her sweetest spurs
Feelings adrift in a darker abyss

- "My love doth speak with voices unheard
Emotions say more then a thousand word"

In the forest misted lawn, where stone figures forlorn
Hath she once again faded
And her spell upon me broke
I sought refuge in a cemetery, jaded
Enfolded myself in a black cloak

In the pale morning sun, did my last breath run
I tore free of my sleep sepulture
To see her standing by me
"Hath I been waken by yer sweet lure?
Move thine delecate lips and answer me"

- "Your soul hath long been wasted
With misery waiting to be solved
Now your end hath hasted
And your death evolved"

- "You and I are together but one time
Though your heart felt lust for me
Rest again peacefully in a silence sublime
I'll be your angel, your Valkerie".




Copyright © Opium ... [ 2003-04-12 00:25:00]
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Re: A Death Tale (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 01:57:50 AM AEST
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A lovely dream fantasy. .. so fine with alittle touch of darknes.. venkat


Re: A Death Tale (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 06:24:22 PM AEST
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vivid details and very dreamy poem.
Michelle


Re: A Death Tale (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 01:14:16 PM AEST
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This is true poetry at its best my friend.....an exceptional write. One of my favorites I have read on this site ever!! Very well done!!!! Larry


Re: A Death Tale (User Rating: 1 )
by gina on Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 11:58:05 AM AEST
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marra pigeon, marra shadow, marra ma ba3rif chou :@ get real hehe
gr8 penning :D
Gina


Re: A Death Tale (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 08:13:19 AM AEST
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oooh this is beautiful! what a special moment! i love this:) hugs nessa


Re: A Death Tale (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 07:56:40 AM AEST
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Aaaggghhh ... I have waited for another of your incredibly beautiful poems .. and this is glorious in its tragic romance ... lovely poetry opium ... Jan




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