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Array ( [sid] => 15800 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Erotica [time] => 2003-04-12 01:25:00 [hometext] => This poem portrays the fantasies of an aged husband [bodytext] => Ah! the wait had seemed so long,
the exquisitely sculptured woman
at last glided in,
wearing a flowered transparent pink sarong.
As the deluge of golden hair splattered
on her moonlit radiant face,
the man's heart stopped it's struggling race.
His eyes popped out;the mouth dry;
the other senses erupting out in passion
from their dormant dreary den,
the nymph was a perfect seductive ten.

Her pouting,moistened ruby red lips,
the slender,velvetty swinging hips,
her natty,lascivious snow white navel,
sharp and sound like a polished gavel,
as the teasing breezy air gently caressed,
those poised,picture perfect heaving bust,
the sordid messy room suddenly got helplessly drowned,
into an uncontrollable,unending humid lust.

The dream got abruptly shattered,
by an ugly unpleasant clatter,
the balding aged pauchy husband,
wiped and scratched his dripping grey matter.
He had as usual been cruelly attacked,
by a pail of cold,icy batter.
As his eyes saw his everyday
foul mouthed shrew,
a naughty question tickled his wrinkled brow,
will we men ever completely GROW!!!?
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 2 [informant] => ravi [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Erotica

Contributed by ravi on Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 01:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Ah! the wait had seemed so long,
the exquisitely sculptured woman
at last glided in,
wearing a flowered transparent pink sarong.
As the deluge of golden hair splattered
on her moonlit radiant face,
the man's heart stopped it's struggling race.
His eyes popped out;the mouth dry;
the other senses erupting out in passion
from their dormant dreary den,
the nymph was a perfect seductive ten.

Her pouting,moistened ruby red lips,
the slender,velvetty swinging hips,
her natty,lascivious snow white navel,
sharp and sound like a polished gavel,
as the teasing breezy air gently caressed,
those poised,picture perfect heaving bust,
the sordid messy room suddenly got helplessly drowned,
into an uncontrollable,unending humid lust.

The dream got abruptly shattered,
by an ugly unpleasant clatter,
the balding aged pauchy husband,
wiped and scratched his dripping grey matter.
He had as usual been cruelly attacked,
by a pail of cold,icy batter.
As his eyes saw his everyday
foul mouthed shrew,
a naughty question tickled his wrinkled brow,
will we men ever completely GROW!!!?




Copyright © ravi ... [ 2003-04-12 01:25:00]
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Re: Erotica (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 02:02:46 AM AEST
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Ahhha.. aww!. there may be so many such ppl. but ..some are completely different.. any how this is a very beautiful write. venkat


Re: Erotica (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 04:56:41 AM AEST
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good write interesting
Shari


Re: Erotica (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 06:18:40 PM AEST
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mmmmmmm interesting write.
Michelle


Re: Erotica (User Rating: 1 )
by Good_King_Bragi on Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 02:18:53 AM AEST
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What can I say? the last line of the poem points it out plain for al to see...




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