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Array ( [sid] => 158017 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ~Mist~ [time] => 2010-03-10 02:39:43 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The moon has left my view tonight
soft shadows falling round.
Rain my night time serenade
as it softly falls to the ground.

No wind, just the peaceful calm
that called me out this night.
My skin damp with the mist
that to me feels just right.

The perfume of the primrose
teases all the senses
and the candle light soflty dances
leaving me in restless trances,

The moon has left my view tonight,
I dance in darkness in the rain.
No wind just the peaceful calm
that soothes my soul away.

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~Mist~

Contributed by shelby on Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 02:39:43 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

The moon has left my view tonight
soft shadows falling round.
Rain my night time serenade
as it softly falls to the ground.

No wind, just the peaceful calm
that called me out this night.
My skin damp with the mist
that to me feels just right.

The perfume of the primrose
teases all the senses
and the candle light soflty dances
leaving me in restless trances,

The moon has left my view tonight,
I dance in darkness in the rain.
No wind just the peaceful calm
that soothes my soul away.

Copyright Â© shelby ... [ 2010-03-10 02:39:43]
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Re: ~Mist~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 03:56:13 AM AEST
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lovely visuals and a dreamy quality, Shelly. My favourite kind of poem.

Spike

Re: ~Mist~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 04:34:34 AM AEST
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enjoyed this very much, lovely write.

Take care
Fuzzy

Re: ~Mist~ (User Rating: 1 )
by longhaircg on Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 06:30:02 AM AEST
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oh so tranquil nicely put
SP

Re: ~Mist~ (User Rating: 1 )
by fadingaway on Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 10:44:43 PM AEST
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soft and elegant. great use of words. Captivating.
and that's a big period at the end of captivating.

Re: ~Mist~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 12th March 2010 @ 05:16:56 PM AEST
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Wonderfully wistful, shelby. I so needed to read this tonight. What a beautiful collection of sigh inducing words. Just perfectly calming. I especially love the last stanza.

Beautiful.

Seléne ~

Re: ~Mist~ (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 17th March 2010 @ 07:21:07 AM AEST
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Dearest Michelle..
The dance in the rain in darkness..
Yes..it may be soothing when we are restless. I enjoyed its read for the love
of nature in your beautiful soul.
yours :-) venkat

Re: ~Mist~ (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 30th April 2010 @ 08:27:47 PM AEST
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exquisite....

hugs n' love nessa

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