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Array ( [sid] => 158035 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Me [time] => 2010-03-10 14:58:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => It is as if the sun shines with no sorrow.
Not a cloud to blacken tomorrow
I hear whispers on the air, of a forgotten world
With no evil to spare.
Can I hope to see you again.
I don't know what to do with this heavy burden on my heart
This evil taint on my soul.

Trust is the sword to which all pains must me forgiven.
Love must be forged in trust for it to succeed.
For success to be the anvil there must be committment.
Commitment to ones self, ones love, and truth the hammer.
To aim true.
Without them we are lost!

My love is to you alone.
My trust is for you to follow you're heart.
My success is being committed to you.
In reading this I find truth.

The pain is almost to much to bear .
The swelling last's an eternity.
It's unfair. Yet optimistic eye's have cast blue skies.
The sun has risen to put me in prison.
I can see the pools of blood, yet I feel no pain.
I am numb.

Take a peak inside my heart, but be wary what you see.
Take a peek inside my mind, but be wary what you find.
Take a glimpse into the past but do not dwell, it did not last.
Use your gift to see the future but be wary it may be scary.
and use those eye's and look at me
and see the love that could be. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 211 [topic] => 61 [informant] => fadingaway [notes] => Please do not comment on your own work. Your comment on this poem has been removed. You can send someone a private message if you wish to thank them or respond to them. Thank you. Moderator_18 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
Me

Contributed by fadingaway on Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 02:58:00 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



It is as if the sun shines with no sorrow.
Not a cloud to blacken tomorrow
I hear whispers on the air, of a forgotten world
With no evil to spare.
Can I hope to see you again.
I don't know what to do with this heavy burden on my heart
This evil taint on my soul.

Trust is the sword to which all pains must me forgiven.
Love must be forged in trust for it to succeed.
For success to be the anvil there must be committment.
Commitment to ones self, ones love, and truth the hammer.
To aim true.
Without them we are lost!

My love is to you alone.
My trust is for you to follow you're heart.
My success is being committed to you.
In reading this I find truth.

The pain is almost to much to bear .
The swelling last's an eternity.
It's unfair. Yet optimistic eye's have cast blue skies.
The sun has risen to put me in prison.
I can see the pools of blood, yet I feel no pain.
I am numb.

Take a peak inside my heart, but be wary what you see.
Take a peek inside my mind, but be wary what you find.
Take a glimpse into the past but do not dwell, it did not last.
Use your gift to see the future but be wary it may be scary.
and use those eye's and look at me
and see the love that could be.




Copyright © fadingaway ... [ 2010-03-10 14:58:00]
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Re: Me (User Rating: 1 )
by longhaircg on Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 03:49:03 PM AEST
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yes we must forgive our past in order to let the future in; love most be forged in trust to suceed, very well writen I loved the feeling of letting go of the past hurts and cautiously opening to love again.
SP


Re: Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Inchiostro on Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 11:02:14 PM AEST
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Do yourself a HUGE favor and let her go, she is gone, and if you're lucky she wont come back.




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