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Array ( [sid] => 158040 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lost [time] => 2010-03-10 17:20:11 [hometext] => Somebody PLEASE come up with a better title then [bodytext] => What are you?
I am the Moon
Lonely I spend the nights
Drowning in my sorrow

What are you?
I am the pine
In a field of flowers
I stand alone
Forever waiting

What are you?
I am the lover
Barefoot and frigid
My hope is gone

What are you?
I am the tear
Brushed away
Sweet and small I fall to the floor
Lost and forgotten

What are you?
I am the hate
Cling to me
I will keep you warm through this
Endless winter

What are you?
I am the love
I will hold you
cry on my shoulder
And remember

Who are you?
I am me
Drowning in my sorrow
Forever waiting
My hope is gone
Lost and forgotten
In this endless winter
And I will always remember the days you told me you loved me
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 363 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Inchiostro [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Lost

Contributed by Inchiostro on Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 05:20:11 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

What are you?
I am the Moon
Lonely I spend the nights
Drowning in my sorrow

What are you?
I am the pine
In a field of flowers
I stand alone
Forever waiting

What are you?
I am the lover
Barefoot and frigid
My hope is gone

What are you?
I am the tear
Brushed away
Sweet and small I fall to the floor
Lost and forgotten

What are you?
I am the hate
Cling to me
I will keep you warm through this
Endless winter

What are you?
I am the love
I will hold you
cry on my shoulder
And remember

Who are you?
I am me
Drowning in my sorrow
Forever waiting
My hope is gone
Lost and forgotten
In this endless winter
And I will always remember the days you told me you loved me

Copyright Â© Inchiostro ... [ 2010-03-10 17:20:11]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 06:32:32 PM AEST
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I love the poetry in this. It is completely captivating. There is something equally breathtaking and heartbreaking about the contradictory affirmations in each verse. Though If I may, I would like to lend one suggestion to this and that is, I would lose the questions at the beginning of each verse. It sways with more power when the conviction of thought is not an answer to a question, but a controlled affirmation of being. Gorgeous writing, though either way. Excellent post.

Seléne ~

Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Mars on Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 06:39:21 PM AEST
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Loved the ending. Marvelous work. Like the question and answer structure, as well as the images you formed. Very nice.

Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by JakerBaker88 on Saturday, 13th March 2010 @ 04:53:54 PM AEST
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This poem pulled at my heartstrings. I can definately relate to this. Simply wonderful. As for the title, maybe " Question and Answer?" Just a thought. Take care.

Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Sunday, 14th March 2010 @ 03:26:30 AM AEST
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Excellent write.

Take care
Fuzzy

Who are you?
I am me
Drowning in my sorrow
Forever waiting
My hope is gone
Lost and forgotten
In this endless winter
And I will always remember the days you told me you loved me

Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Harsh on Monday, 15th March 2010 @ 01:35:41 AM AEST
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Interesting write.
Keep up the good work Brandon.

TC

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