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Array ( [sid] => 158042 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Remember The Time [time] => 2010-03-10 19:20:34 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I come to a time
When my minds out of place,
I see a new world
As my mind is in space.

I look at your face
Run my hand through your hair,
Then I reminisce
The memories we share.

You remember the date
And time we first met,
I looked at your eyes
Not knowing what I'd get.

I'm holding in my arms
The love of my life,
I wouldn't let you go
Not without a fight.

I love you so much
As I still reminisce,
I go back to the time
Of true loves first kiss.

I looked in your eyes
And fell deeply in love,
I thought I was flying
As well as a dove.

The moment that we kissed
I knew what to do,
Do you remember the time
That you said I do.

It was sunny outside
We went to the park,
We stayed until seven
It was just after dark.

I wanted you to stop
To just look at me,
To look in my eyes
As I got on one knee.

I told you this story
And pull out a ring
You looked down and you said
So when's the wedding. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 2 [informant] => DoubleS [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Remember The Time

Contributed by DoubleS on Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 07:20:34 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I come to a time
When my minds out of place,
I see a new world
As my mind is in space.

I look at your face
Run my hand through your hair,
Then I reminisce
The memories we share.

You remember the date
And time we first met,
I looked at your eyes
Not knowing what I'd get.

I'm holding in my arms
The love of my life,
I wouldn't let you go
Not without a fight.

I love you so much
As I still reminisce,
I go back to the time
Of true loves first kiss.

I looked in your eyes
And fell deeply in love,
I thought I was flying
As well as a dove.

The moment that we kissed
I knew what to do,
Do you remember the time
That you said I do.

It was sunny outside
We went to the park,
We stayed until seven
It was just after dark.

I wanted you to stop
To just look at me,
To look in my eyes
As I got on one knee.

I told you this story
And pull out a ring
You looked down and you said
So when's the wedding.

Copyright Â© DoubleS ... [ 2010-03-10 19:20:34]
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Re: Remember The Time (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 10:55:52 PM AEST
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I'm holding in my arms the love of my life......that line is worth more than gold and so is a heart who can love like this beautiful write

Re: Remember The Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 12th March 2010 @ 03:47:48 PM AEST
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Very romantic. This is a beautiful love story, filled with all the delicate nuances that a heart craves. Just lovely.

Seléne ~

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