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Array ( [sid] => 158070 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Rumble of Thunder [time] => 2010-03-11 20:16:42 [hometext] => Old Man. [bodytext] => ~

Did I miss the point?
Walking rather slowly, the echo of footsteps follow.
A rumble of thunder.
Perhaps not.

Life is many things, but what of it?
It dies.
A rumble of thunder, never to be seen again.
All the same. One day it must end. It dies.
A rumble of thunder.
Perhaps not.

I briskly walk my well-trodden path.
It is cold out. This I know.
There have been days like this.
The same path. All pass, all walk.
None stay.
A rumble of thunder.
Perhaps not.

What did the old man say?
I cannot remember.
He speaks, but never is heard.
They pay no attention, their footsteps lock him away.
He sits and waits.

I see.
A rumble of thunder.
Perhaps not. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 237 [topic] => 75 [informant] => Mars [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

A Rumble of Thunder

Contributed by Mars on Thursday, 11th March 2010 @ 08:16:42 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

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Did I miss the point?
Walking rather slowly, the echo of footsteps follow.
A rumble of thunder.
Perhaps not.

Life is many things, but what of it?
It dies.
A rumble of thunder, never to be seen again.
All the same. One day it must end. It dies.
A rumble of thunder.
Perhaps not.

I briskly walk my well-trodden path.
It is cold out. This I know.
There have been days like this.
The same path. All pass, all walk.
None stay.
A rumble of thunder.
Perhaps not.

What did the old man say?
I cannot remember.
He speaks, but never is heard.
They pay no attention, their footsteps lock him away.
He sits and waits.

I see.
A rumble of thunder.
Perhaps not.

Copyright © Mars ... [ 2010-03-11 20:16:42]
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Re: A Rumble of Thunder (User Rating: 1 )
by JakerBaker88 on Sunday, 14th March 2010 @ 02:24:36 PM AEST
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You're right, life itself is fleeting. Your poem really makes the reader ponder this point etc. It also makes you wonder what you might be taking for granted. Good strong writing here. =)

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