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Array ( [sid] => 158107 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Turn to me [time] => 2010-03-13 01:49:07 [hometext] => To you. [bodytext] => I wonder if you realise, i wonder if you care
I think about you always, and wonder if I ever dare.

To tell you how Im feeling, to share with you my heart,
I guess it doesnt matter, we live so far apart.

I would move the stars above me, I would part the deep blue sea,
Id move the highest mountain, to have your arms around me.

I know that I am dreaming, You never lead me on
But my heart just has this longing, of wanting to belong.

Your smile is so infectious, your wit just makes me calm
My heart it has been broken, but it cant resist your charm.

I know youll never feel it, i know you have your life
And mine is in New Zealand, while yours is full of strife.

You always make me smile, no matter what you think,
and when i never see you, my spirit it does sink.

This is a one way ticket, i purchased long before,
and it cant be refunded, its a one way system door.

So this is where i leave it, there nothing more to say,
Just wish that I could tell you, But ill leave it just this way.

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Turn to me

Contributed by thistle_and_fern on Saturday, 13th March 2010 @ 01:49:07 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

I wonder if you realise, i wonder if you care
I think about you always, and wonder if I ever dare.

To tell you how Im feeling, to share with you my heart,
I guess it doesnt matter, we live so far apart.

I would move the stars above me, I would part the deep blue sea,
Id move the highest mountain, to have your arms around me.

I know that I am dreaming, You never lead me on
But my heart just has this longing, of wanting to belong.

Your smile is so infectious, your wit just makes me calm
My heart it has been broken, but it cant resist your charm.

I know youll never feel it, i know you have your life
And mine is in New Zealand, while yours is full of strife.

You always make me smile, no matter what you think,
and when i never see you, my spirit it does sink.

This is a one way ticket, i purchased long before,
and it cant be refunded, its a one way system door.

So this is where i leave it, there nothing more to say,
Just wish that I could tell you, But ill leave it just this way.

Authors, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit.

Copyright © thistle_and_fern ... [ 2010-03-13 01:49:07]
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Re: Turn to me (User Rating: 1 )
by Mars on Saturday, 13th March 2010 @ 07:26:53 AM AEST
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Loved it, loved it! So innocent, filled with desire, and left me asking for more. I wish I had the drive to write this kind of poetry, but alas, I have the poorest luck.

Then again, your poem was about wanting, not having, now wasn't it?

Nice one.

Re: Turn to me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 13th March 2010 @ 11:14:37 AM AEST
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Wanting to unload the burden and to have just a few moments to tell that person just how you feel inside but never having the opportunity leaves us tired from wanting something precious that certain someone will never give. I enjoyed reading this and the message is clear.

take care
duff

Re: Turn to me (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Saturday, 13th March 2010 @ 02:40:08 PM AEST
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enjoyed the read, Beautifully written.

Take care
Fuzzy

Re: Turn to me (User Rating: 1 )
by JustShifter on Saturday, 13th March 2010 @ 08:46:23 PM AEST
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thats really beautiful

To tell you how Im feeling, to share with you my heart,
I guess it doesnt matter, we live so far apart.

it makes one wonder , where does this secret love live ?

Re: Turn to me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 1st April 2010 @ 08:10:48 AM AEST
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a beautiful poem

I wonder if you realise, i wonder if you care
I think about you always, and wonder if I ever dare.

To tell you how Im feeling, to share with you my heart,
I guess it doesnt matter, we live so far apart.

dont let distance hold you back - tell that person how you feel or forever wonder "if only" or "what if". you have nothing to lose!

beautifully written

Re: Turn to me (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 9th April 2010 @ 03:54:02 PM AEST
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Unfortunately life doesn't run to a script, if it did it would be so much easier for all of us.
Only you can decide what to do or say to someone, your fate is always in your hands.
People may offer advice but the heart is always the best guide.

"I wonder if you realise, i wonder if you care"........the way you write with such intensity, who would not care ?.
Maybe he already knows

Steve

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