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Array ( [sid] => 158130 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Think of You [time] => 2010-03-13 21:19:02 [hometext] => Nah' I've got better things to think about. [bodytext] => ~

Who's to think of you?
Why should I be sad?
I gave you every chance to take,
And I was almost had.

Why should I be sorry?
Should I not forget?
Those sleepless nights and tearless cries
Are easy to regret.

You have given nothing.
What should I return?
Perhaps a lesson could be had...
A thing or two I've learned.

The damage you've inflicted...
Those scars can never fade.
Service with a smile and
A debt left unpaid. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 240 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Mars [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Think of You

Contributed by Mars on Saturday, 13th March 2010 @ 09:19:02 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

~

Who's to think of you?
Why should I be sad?
I gave you every chance to take,
And I was almost had.

Why should I be sorry?
Should I not forget?
Those sleepless nights and tearless cries
Are easy to regret.

You have given nothing.
What should I return?
Perhaps a lesson could be had...
A thing or two I've learned.

The damage you've inflicted...
Those scars can never fade.
Service with a smile and
A debt left unpaid.

Copyright © Mars ... [ 2010-03-13 21:19:02]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Think of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 13th March 2010 @ 10:08:21 PM AEST
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Scars of love that we wish would fade away yet that wish is never granted leaving us to dwell on matters of the past. I like the imagery used here.

"Service with a smile and
A debt left unpaid'

Well written

take care
duff

Re: Think of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Chamaron on Saturday, 13th March 2010 @ 11:29:42 PM AEST
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"Service with a smile" especially brilliant irony. You've got the right idea here... you're better off without them, but hey "a lesson could be had". Excellent poem.

Re: Think of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Sunday, 14th March 2010 @ 03:18:12 AM AEST
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Like this, write, very well written

Take care
Fuzzy
The damage you've inflicted...
Those scars can never fade.
Service with a smile and
A debt left unpaid.

Re: Think of You (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Tuesday, 16th March 2010 @ 08:36:51 AM AEST
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I can hear the snarling as this is written! alot of anger and alot of pain,but I love what you wrote at the top, nah I've got better things to think about,with that spirit I hope you have moved on. well written

Re: Think of You (User Rating: 1 )
by rambo56 on Friday, 28th May 2010 @ 06:15:02 AM AEST
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like this poem good write

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