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Array ( [sid] => 15844 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => My Next Refrain [time] => 2003-04-12 17:25:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I never thought it would end
Let alone this way,
You said all the right things
A woman could say

I gave what little I had
And what I had not,
I didn't want too much
Or so I had thought

And then the day came when
You pushed in the knife,
It seemed more of a pleasure
You squeezing out my life

You ignored all of my pleas
You knew I was falling,
It seemed you heard just grief
When my sorrow was calling

You may have been quite scared
It seemed a fast pace,
But I was in no hurry
Love is not a race

Maybe you had gotten lost
Wondering what to do,
But keeping it a secret
Hurt me and guarded you

A friend had pulled me out
Of the crash one day,
Helped me to see colour
When all I saw was grey

It's been a lot of months now
Of getting back on track,
I've stood up, forced a smile
Gave you the knife back

And so the story closes
I won't see you again,
I'm be here just waiting
Till my next refrain [comments] => 2 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 22 [informant] => ThirtyDays [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

My Next Refrain

Contributed by ThirtyDays on Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 05:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I never thought it would end
Let alone this way,
You said all the right things
A woman could say

I gave what little I had
And what I had not,
I didn't want too much
Or so I had thought

And then the day came when
You pushed in the knife,
It seemed more of a pleasure
You squeezing out my life

You ignored all of my pleas
You knew I was falling,
It seemed you heard just grief
When my sorrow was calling

You may have been quite scared
It seemed a fast pace,
But I was in no hurry
Love is not a race

Maybe you had gotten lost
Wondering what to do,
But keeping it a secret
Hurt me and guarded you

A friend had pulled me out
Of the crash one day,
Helped me to see colour
When all I saw was grey

It's been a lot of months now
Of getting back on track,
I've stood up, forced a smile
Gave you the knife back

And so the story closes
I won't see you again,
I'm be here just waiting
Till my next refrain

Copyright © ThirtyDays ... [ 2003-04-12 17:25:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: My Next Refrain (User Rating: 1 )
by full_blur on Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 05:39:16 PM AEST
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The meter of your poem is outstanding. Godd structuring and flow. Great job.

Re: My Next Refrain (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 06:27:45 PM AEST
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Michelle

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