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Array ( [sid] => 158531 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love Me to Death [time] => 2010-03-30 09:18:55 [hometext] => Just the pouring forth of a tormented soul [bodytext] => It's never going to happen, who am I kidding? It's always a game of cat and mouse with you, my love.
From first sight something about you mystified me, never had I seen such beautiful eyes..so intense. Emerald green, floating a top the entry to your beautiful, earthy soul. Love begins, two souls touch through the interstitial ether. Those eyes; my love, my life, my purpose, and a mysterious lover so brilliant, so intense.
I still don't know the man I love. Were you orchestrating my voyage toward insanity? Did you enjoy the torment you inflicted upon me, my sadist?
You've either played me well, or I am just helplessly and hopelessly in love. My reality has become distorted and you have me wound so tight that I'm coming undone..
I'll never let you know about all the times you've brought me to the brink of insanity, brought out the best and worst in me, but somehow… I think you know what you do to me. Letting you in has been the undoing of me, cos nothing in my life has been right since I met you many an eve ago.
I want to see you beg, to bleed to feel an ounce of the pain I've felt over you. I kept opening that door and letting you in, trusting again.. believing I'm the "one."
And every time, as insidious as cancer, you penetrate your way back into me again.
Is it my destiny, my fate to be tortured by you for the rest of my life?
Is this my purgatory, is it my hell? How can I ever get out? I am lost in this maze.
I am your slave, and the sickest of all , through all this pain I love you till the end.
I need your torture, I need the pain, because you are the one who makes me feel more emotions in one moment than I could feel in a lifetime with anyone else.
Hold me my tormentor and love me to death. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 75 [informant] => veronicablue [notes] => Corrected spelling as requested ~ Moderator_18 Mar 30, 2010 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )
Love Me to Death

Contributed by veronicablue on Tuesday, 30th March 2010 @ 09:18:55 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished



It's never going to happen, who am I kidding? It's always a game of cat and mouse with you, my love.
From first sight something about you mystified me, never had I seen such beautiful eyes..so intense. Emerald green, floating a top the entry to your beautiful, earthy soul. Love begins, two souls touch through the interstitial ether. Those eyes; my love, my life, my purpose, and a mysterious lover so brilliant, so intense.
I still don't know the man I love. Were you orchestrating my voyage toward insanity? Did you enjoy the torment you inflicted upon me, my sadist?
You've either played me well, or I am just helplessly and hopelessly in love. My reality has become distorted and you have me wound so tight that I'm coming undone..
I'll never let you know about all the times you've brought me to the brink of insanity, brought out the best and worst in me, but somehow… I think you know what you do to me. Letting you in has been the undoing of me, cos nothing in my life has been right since I met you many an eve ago.
I want to see you beg, to bleed to feel an ounce of the pain I've felt over you. I kept opening that door and letting you in, trusting again.. believing I'm the "one."
And every time, as insidious as cancer, you penetrate your way back into me again.
Is it my destiny, my fate to be tortured by you for the rest of my life?
Is this my purgatory, is it my hell? How can I ever get out? I am lost in this maze.
I am your slave, and the sickest of all , through all this pain I love you till the end.
I need your torture, I need the pain, because you are the one who makes me feel more emotions in one moment than I could feel in a lifetime with anyone else.
Hold me my tormentor and love me to death.




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Re: Love Me to Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Chamaron on Tuesday, 30th March 2010 @ 05:46:49 PM AEST
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The last line is epic; really ties together the painful addiction of love. "Hold me my tormentor" I love the way you say that. What a great expression. Well done.




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