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Array ( [sid] => 158596 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bloody Mess [time] => 2010-04-01 18:08:46 [hometext] => ... [bodytext] => DARKNESS GIVES WAY
TO A DEEPER SHADE OF BLACK
NERVES OVERWHELMED
IN THIS MASSIVE ATTACK
it takes... it's toll
BUT I'M ALIVE
IT DIDN'T KILL ME
I DID NOT DIE
BUT NOW I FIND
NEW URGES
PULSE THROUGH MY MIND
STRICKEN
I MUST COMPLY

RIP
(THIS WRETCHED FLESH)
INHUMANE
HELL MANIFESTS
RIP
(THIS WRETCHED FLESH)
This virus feels like
STRENGTH

MY WILL GIVES WAY
TO STRAIGHT HATE
I SALIVATE
AND SPRINT TOWARDS PREY
I'VE GOT AN
ITCH TO SCRATCH
IN YOUR THROAT
HOT, GUSHING BLOOD
FEELS SO REMOTE

But don't get me WRONG
I'VE ALWAYS LOATHED THIS WORLD
IT JUST TOOK A *****IN' BITE
TO MAKE THIS UNFURL
NOW I'VE NO PATIENCE FOR A CONSCIENCE
depriving me
THE BLISS OF WHEN YOU BLEED
WHEN EVERYONE BLEEDS

SPLATTERED
TO A ***** MESS

SPLATTERED BLOODY MESSES
BLOTCH THE STREETS
STILL TWITCHING
UNRELENTING
FURY
PSYCHOTICALLY
RELEASED
SPLATTERED BLOODY MESSES

time blurs
amidst the screams
mind churned
rabies

NOW WITH GORE TO MY KNEES
I DRAG ON
FATAL FATIGUE
THIS DISEASE WON'T BE PLEASED
UNTIL MY DEATH

{DVL}
3-30-2010 [comments] => 0 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 34 [informant] => sicknivesevered [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

Bloody Mess

Contributed by sicknivesevered on Thursday, 1st April 2010 @ 06:08:46 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

DARKNESS GIVES WAY
TO A DEEPER SHADE OF BLACK
NERVES OVERWHELMED
IN THIS MASSIVE ATTACK
it takes... it's toll
BUT I'M ALIVE
IT DIDN'T KILL ME
I DID NOT DIE
BUT NOW I FIND
NEW URGES
PULSE THROUGH MY MIND
STRICKEN
I MUST COMPLY

RIP
(THIS WRETCHED FLESH)
INHUMANE
HELL MANIFESTS
RIP
(THIS WRETCHED FLESH)
This virus feels like
STRENGTH

MY WILL GIVES WAY
TO STRAIGHT HATE
I SALIVATE
AND SPRINT TOWARDS PREY
I'VE GOT AN
ITCH TO SCRATCH
IN YOUR THROAT
HOT, GUSHING BLOOD
FEELS SO REMOTE

But don't get me WRONG
I'VE ALWAYS LOATHED THIS WORLD
IT JUST TOOK A *****IN' BITE
TO MAKE THIS UNFURL
NOW I'VE NO PATIENCE FOR A CONSCIENCE
depriving me
THE BLISS OF WHEN YOU BLEED
WHEN EVERYONE BLEEDS

SPLATTERED
TO A ***** MESS

SPLATTERED BLOODY MESSES
BLOTCH THE STREETS
STILL TWITCHING
UNRELENTING
FURY
PSYCHOTICALLY
RELEASED
SPLATTERED BLOODY MESSES

time blurs
amidst the screams
mind churned
rabies

NOW WITH GORE TO MY KNEES
I DRAG ON
FATAL FATIGUE
THIS DISEASE WON'T BE PLEASED
UNTIL MY DEATH

{DVL}
3-30-2010

Copyright © sicknivesevered ... [ 2010-04-01 18:08:46]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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