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Too good to be true since you loved me.
I was wrong in thinking we were meant to be;
Her name on your lips when I thought you to be free.
I wish I was blind to all that I've seen;
My life without you will be incomplete------
But why should I care?
I was right in thinking you were a dream;
Much too good for someone like me. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 222 [topic] => 75 [informant] => JakerBaker88 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

I Was

Contributed by JakerBaker88 on Wednesday, 7th April 2010 @ 02:47:01 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished

I was right in thinking you were a dream;
Too good to be true since you loved me.
I was wrong in thinking we were meant to be;
Her name on your lips when I thought you to be free.
I wish I was blind to all that I've seen;
My life without you will be incomplete------
But why should I care?
I was right in thinking you were a dream;
Much too good for someone like me.

Copyright Â© JakerBaker88 ... [ 2010-04-07 02:47:01]
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Re: I Was (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Wednesday, 7th April 2010 @ 03:29:42 AM AEST
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When we plough so much hope into a relationship and have so much love to give,then it doesnt work out the fall out can make you feel very little self worth, but if you change your focus from all that has gone wrong to all that your heart is capable of giving and receiving then you see the true reflection.very honest write

Re: I Was (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 7th April 2010 @ 05:46:05 AM AEST
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JB, it's so tough when things don't turn out as planned, and none of us have that foresight, unfortunately. But never think you are not good enough. For ANYONE. You have a beauty in you that is precious and rare. I won't give you the standard clichés of how you'll meet someone special, blah blah blah. Anything anyone could say at this point would seem trite. But writing is a wonderful way to exercise some emotional demons and your talent is boundless.

take care

Seléne ~

Re: I Was (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 7th April 2010 @ 07:48:31 AM AEST
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What Anna and Selene said!!!!

Re: I Was (User Rating: 1 )
by Inchiostro on Wednesday, 7th April 2010 @ 07:40:53 PM AEST
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You Jump too a lot of conclusions, maybe you should step back and reassess the situation.

Good Poem

Brandon

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