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Array ( [sid] => 158744 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Greedy little knight [time] => 2010-04-08 03:33:36 [hometext] => [bodytext] => .. struck by lightning in a winter's day cold ..
.. burst from a dream into the reality world ..
.. i'm awake to that fright of a sound ..
.. of that loud of a tap upon the ground ..
.. when the window was then force to unfold ..
.. to a scream in the night and my name was then told ..

.. greedy little knight .. it's time to bleed ..
.. tonight is the night when you brew what you seed ..

.. i once was your love .. and once you were mine ..
.. you were the air i breathe .. till you left without a sign ..
.. love is not a game .. and your aim was to play ..
.. caused nothing but pain with every word you say ..
.. when only death could take that pain away ..

.. greedy little knight .. it's time to bleed ..
.. tonight is the night when you brew what you seed ..

.. alive i was .. and apart we were ..
.. now i'm dead .. just a spirit in the air ..
.. and now i'm here but to take you with me ..
.. to a place you'll be mine for eternity ..

.. greedy little knight .. you're all that i need .. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 235 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Rumplestiltskin [notes] => Corrected spelling as requested ~ Moderator_18 Apr 8, 2010 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Greedy little knight

Contributed by Rumplestiltskin on Thursday, 8th April 2010 @ 03:33:36 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



.. struck by lightning in a winter's day cold ..
.. burst from a dream into the reality world ..
.. i'm awake to that fright of a sound ..
.. of that loud of a tap upon the ground ..
.. when the window was then force to unfold ..
.. to a scream in the night and my name was then told ..

.. greedy little knight .. it's time to bleed ..
.. tonight is the night when you brew what you seed ..

.. i once was your love .. and once you were mine ..
.. you were the air i breathe .. till you left without a sign ..
.. love is not a game .. and your aim was to play ..
.. caused nothing but pain with every word you say ..
.. when only death could take that pain away ..

.. greedy little knight .. it's time to bleed ..
.. tonight is the night when you brew what you seed ..

.. alive i was .. and apart we were ..
.. now i'm dead .. just a spirit in the air ..
.. and now i'm here but to take you with me ..
.. to a place you'll be mine for eternity ..

.. greedy little knight .. you're all that i need ..




Copyright © Rumplestiltskin ... [ 2010-04-08 03:33:36]
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Re: Greedy little knight (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 8th April 2010 @ 11:39:20 AM AEST
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In reading this i found there to be a dark, twisted, playfulness throughout your words that left me with a creepy feeling scratching my mind. Something dark coming for you in the night leading you to the unknown, this is eerie and well written.

take care
duff


Re: Greedy little knight (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 9th April 2010 @ 08:50:50 AM AEST
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Hey, R! Where have you been? What an eerie and dark piece to return with. Wow. I was very impressed with the way you wrote this... insight into the soul of a man lost in the depth of rejection. And yes, it is a bit scary, but that's the point, no? lol Wonderful write. Nice to see you posting again. :)



Seléne ~




Re: Greedy little knight (User Rating: 1 )
by RuMPleStiLTSkiN on Saturday, 10th April 2010 @ 04:13:01 AM AEST
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Thnx a million duff and selene .. very sweet of you to say ..
i'm sorry for that such of disappearing selene .. i've been busy .. i'm having upcoming exams right now so i have to study :S :S
i hope you are fine and healthy .. take care my good friend (:




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