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Array ( [sid] => 158973 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => yes please [time] => 2010-04-16 16:00:29 [hometext] => [bodytext] => This is it,
I hit the bottom
as long as you remain
just outside my vision
i’ll crawl my way up there
Inching my way through the obstacles
that love raises up in front of me
no cold no weather will break my will
and these nails will fall scratching your heels
beyond the scare lies a land of never ending bliss
and soft sheets

here i am
wet still behind the ears
no book prepared me for this
the action men were always at ease
when the brands became a topic
i was still struggling for the moves on my joystick
and the stores they let me to believe
that life was about beating people with my skills
and now seeing your eyes dressed with pity
there’s more to life that what i led to believe
drinks, pubs and good meals to invite you in
and the confidence which i desperately need

here it goes
my opening line
nervous and sweating like a pig
all pumped up with alcohol and weed
say yes please
say yes please

AUTHORS PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit. [comments] => 0 [counter] => 197 [topic] => 48 [informant] => net [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

yes please

Contributed by net on Friday, 16th April 2010 @ 04:00:29 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

This is it,
I hit the bottom
as long as you remain
just outside my vision
i’ll crawl my way up there
Inching my way through the obstacles
that love raises up in front of me
no cold no weather will break my will
and these nails will fall scratching your heels
beyond the scare lies a land of never ending bliss
and soft sheets

here i am
wet still behind the ears
no book prepared me for this
the action men were always at ease
when the brands became a topic
i was still struggling for the moves on my joystick
and the stores they let me to believe
that life was about beating people with my skills
and now seeing your eyes dressed with pity
there’s more to life that what i led to believe
drinks, pubs and good meals to invite you in
and the confidence which i desperately need

here it goes
my opening line
nervous and sweating like a pig
all pumped up with alcohol and weed
say yes please
say yes please

AUTHORS PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit.

Copyright Â© net ... [ 2010-04-16 16:00:29]
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