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Array ( [sid] => 15901 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => one minute [time] => 2003-04-13 11:35:00 [hometext] => i wrote this in 1 minute. [bodytext] => it took a minute to understand myself
of why i feel so old sometimes
and why i put myself through hell
i question and answer but never
learn anything new
i listen
i steal
i cheat
im worthless
is this why no one loves me?
could i be too analytical
could i force myself to feel too much?
i forgot in what direction this was supposed to go in
there are about 20 seconds left to feel
but i need to truly feel
10
9
8
7
6
im out of ideas
3
2
1
worthless. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 25 [informant] => fallensilence [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

one minute

Contributed by fallensilence on Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 11:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

it took a minute to understand myself
of why i feel so old sometimes
and why i put myself through hell
i question and answer but never
learn anything new
i listen
i steal
i cheat
im worthless
is this why no one loves me?
could i be too analytical
could i force myself to feel too much?
i forgot in what direction this was supposed to go in
there are about 20 seconds left to feel
but i need to truly feel
10
9
8
7
6
im out of ideas
3
2
1
worthless.

Copyright © fallensilence ... [ 2003-04-13 11:35:00]
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Re: one minute (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 03:50:27 PM AEST
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oh...i know exactly what you mean...

Re: one minute (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 09:07:20 PM AEST
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no your not worthless. If you stop feeling you stop living. This is a great poem with wonderful expression.
Michelle

Re: one minute (User Rating: 1 )
by tease_whizz on Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 07:08:03 AM AEST
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this one flows like the thought process, really interesting style. no one with your talent is worthless. Kate x

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