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But I need a reason why
I need to know that you don’t see
That my heart is in a tie

We were best friends
But now you don’t see
That you’re all that I want
The pain is as bad as can be

Knowing that you hate me,
The pain is pretty bad
Every time I speak
I seem to make you mad

So why is it you don’t like my presence?
Why do you walk by me without a glance?
I just don’t see why
You won’t give me a chance

If I said that your smile lit up the room
Would you look at me as me?
If I said your eyes were as blue as the sky
Would it be your love you guarantee?

If I have to sweet talk my way
Into your loving arms
You’re not worth my time
Even with all your charms

But I want to give you
Everything and more
Yet I can’t seem to find you
Because you’re closed behind the door

So why don’t you come out
And tell me the very truth
Tell me very soon
Before I wait away my youth
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 912 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Jessi95 [notes] => Corrected spelling as requested ~ Moderator_18 May 1 2010 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

why don't you like me

Contributed by Jessi95 on Friday, 30th April 2010 @ 08:59:55 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I know that you don’t like me
But I need a reason why
I need to know that you don’t see
That my heart is in a tie

We were best friends
But now you don’t see
That you’re all that I want
The pain is as bad as can be

Knowing that you hate me,
The pain is pretty bad
Every time I speak
I seem to make you mad

So why is it you don’t like my presence?
Why do you walk by me without a glance?
I just don’t see why
You won’t give me a chance

If I said that your smile lit up the room
Would you look at me as me?
If I said your eyes were as blue as the sky
Would it be your love you guarantee?

If I have to sweet talk my way
Into your loving arms
You’re not worth my time
Even with all your charms

But I want to give you
Everything and more
Yet I can’t seem to find you
Because you’re closed behind the door

So why don’t you come out
And tell me the very truth
Tell me very soon
Before I wait away my youth

Copyright Â© Jessi95 ... [ 2010-04-30 20:59:55]
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Re: why don't you like me (User Rating: 1 )
by aliopterix on Saturday, 1st May 2010 @ 06:52:01 AM AEST
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Such an emotional piece of unrequited love. Beautifully written. Aliopterix

Re: why don't you like me (User Rating: 1 )
by Nevilleconnie on Saturday, 1st May 2010 @ 06:17:28 PM AEST
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Your poems always amaze me. There all so amazing. Keep up the good work.

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