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[sid] => 159522
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => VASTNESS OF ETERNITY
[time] => 2010-05-04 12:07:11
[hometext] => Just thinking.
[bodytext] => The stars tell stories of long ago
Spreading light on mysteries to find.
They speak not one little word.
They twinkle every where and shine.
Ahh the vastness of eternity
blows my Earthly brain.
Our vessel only here for a time.
Simple humanness can't obtain.
We'll get a new body each time.
This one will die and fade.
Don't know 'bout your beliefs
But miracles exist in life's parade.
Eternity has no end, see?
Now that's a wonder to obtain,
Each new day our lives brand new.
A beginning our victory still remains.
So I'll shout, there's no end.
Just look at heavens beauty above
He'll give us a brand new body.
Let go of hatred, tune into love.
[comments] => 19
[counter] => 683
[topic] => 43
[informant] => emystar
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 40
[ratings] => 8
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => oops
)
VASTNESS OF ETERNITY
Contributed by
emystar
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Tuesday, 4th May 2010 @ 12:07:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The stars tell stories of long ago
Spreading light on mysteries to find.
They speak not one little word.
They twinkle every where and shine.
Ahh the vastness of eternity
blows my Earthly brain.
Our vessel only here for a time.
Simple humanness can't obtain.
We'll get a new body each time.
This one will die and fade.
Don't know 'bout your beliefs
But miracles exist in life's parade.
Eternity has no end, see?
Now that's a wonder to obtain,
Each new day our lives brand new.
A beginning our victory still remains.
So I'll shout, there's no end.
Just look at heavens beauty above
He'll give us a brand new body.
Let go of hatred, tune into love.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2010-05-04 12:07:11]
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Re: VASTNESS OF ETERNITY
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by elle on
Tuesday, 4th May 2010 @ 12:13:54 PM AEST
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| A beautiful message. . . elle :) |
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Re: VASTNESS OF ETERNITY
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 4th May 2010 @ 12:46:42 PM AEST
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emy this is such a beautifully flowing poem with such a lovely message!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: VASTNESS OF ETERNITY
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by Nevilleconnie on
Tuesday, 4th May 2010 @ 02:30:54 PM AEST
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| A very beautiful poem, with a beautiful message. A lovely read. |
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Re: VASTNESS OF ETERNITY
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 4th May 2010 @ 05:07:26 PM AEST
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You rock with this poem, Grrlfriend... Great message here....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: VASTNESS OF ETERNITY
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by aliopterix on
Wednesday, 5th May 2010 @ 02:10:54 AM AEST
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| So full of hope for the future, very beautiful. Aliopterix. |
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Re: VASTNESS OF ETERNITY
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by spud on
Wednesday, 5th May 2010 @ 04:55:45 AM AEST
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Hi Emy,
''Let go of hatred, tune into love.'' Like it!
Tommy
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Re: VASTNESS OF ETERNITY
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 6th May 2010 @ 06:08:21 PM AEST
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Ahhhhhhhhh Emy this poem could go on forever and ever............
Tune into love, and hate never
Great job
Warm love
momconsue |
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Re: VASTNESS OF ETERNITY
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by xXInkInMyVeinsXx on
Sunday, 30th May 2010 @ 01:40:31 PM AEST
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Thanks for commenting on my poem. I thought I'd check out yours. I like the contrast of the conversational, easy-going tone with the weighty topic. Overall it's pretty awesome :)
-Anne-Marie |
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Re: VASTNESS OF ETERNITY
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 5th June 2010 @ 10:50:56 PM AEST
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there you go again
with a classic flow
oh
you are the best. |
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Re: VASTNESS OF ETERNITY
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by Potpourri on
Friday, 2nd July 2010 @ 11:30:02 AM AEST
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as always most intriguing,
lovely write my friend . . .
Potpourri
ty 4 visiting my page. |
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Re: VASTNESS OF ETERNITY
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Saturday, 17th July 2010 @ 03:00:47 PM AEST
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Dearest Emy!
I am profoundly stirred by the beauty , depth and luminosity of this wonderful poem.
Somethig to lift up the soul and nourish it.
Thanks for this remarkable and inspiring work. of art. and devotion
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All my love
Elizabeth Dandy |
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Re: VASTNESS OF ETERNITY
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by Spike on
Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 05:28:32 AM AEST
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from the heart indeed - beauty, change, regeneration - and always, hope. Nice one.
Spike |
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Re: VASTNESS OF ETERNITY
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by spud on
Friday, 23rd July 2010 @ 11:52:28 AM AEST
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Hi Emystar,
Reminds me of when I was a boy and I first tried
to imagine 'Eternity.' In a child's mind everything
has an end - the lollilop you hoped would last for
ever is gone in 30 minutes, the ice-cream that
starts to melt no matter how long you try to make
it last, etc... etc... - so eternity in the hereafter
was just not within the realms of my understanding.
I still struggle but the older I get the more 'Hope'
I store away.
A lovely piece of poetry, and much to ponder.
Tommy
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Re: VASTNESS OF ETERNITY
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by 143 on
Saturday, 24th July 2010 @ 07:30:24 AM AEST
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How I enjoy your writting!
WOW, TOTALLY STRESSFREE!
SO AWESOME EMY, WOW!!!
GREAT,GREAT!
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Re: VASTNESS OF ETERNITY
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 27th July 2010 @ 02:38:12 PM AEST
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Great style and some interesting thoughts thrown in for good measure too.
Makes you wonder about life in general.We are all just dots in time in the great map of eternity.
Steve |
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Re: VASTNESS OF ETERNITY
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by Potpourri on
Wednesday, 11th August 2010 @ 07:08:52 PM AEST
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As always emy beautiful and
inspiering work, your right up
there with the best of them . . .
ty 4 visiting my page and commenting.
Potpourri
aka.u know who,
((((emy)))) |
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Re: VASTNESS OF ETERNITY
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by bunit682 on
Wednesday, 8th September 2010 @ 07:24:42 AM AEST
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| simply beautiful |
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Re: VASTNESS OF ETERNITY
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by sia on
Thursday, 12th May 2011 @ 07:58:06 AM AEST
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wow... so beautiful.. it's totally awesome!
loved it!
made me feel...so nice after reading it! :-)
all my love,
sia. |
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Re: VASTNESS OF ETERNITY
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th December 2011 @ 01:02:30 PM AEST
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kudos!!!!
Reaffirms some of my nights in the mountains, in my sleepin' bag on my patio 'n' my bedroom ceiling is the stars. Mmm! Capture 'n' inspiration in this piece of yers.
wabl
ken
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