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Life can be a lot of things
Can it be little or everything
I feel pain and suffering in mine
Just keep on wondering when the time
Time will come when it all will just end
As my life and dreams begin to mend
I wonder if it is ever true
If my love gets thru to u
Is it real or is it fake
Or maybe its just my mistake
I live a life of pain everyday
Wondering if their will be a way
A way to end this pain alone
Before my life and dreams are overthrown
My life will always be in pain
Played and toyed with like a game
Life will always be the same
To us and to all it will never change
I hold a gun in my hand
Live or die I shall not Stand

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Life Eternal

Contributed by Lone on Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 10:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Life
Life can be a lot of things
Can it be little or everything
I feel pain and suffering in mine
Just keep on wondering when the time
Time will come when it all will just end
As my life and dreams begin to mend
I wonder if it is ever true
If my love gets thru to u
Is it real or is it fake
Or maybe its just my mistake
I live a life of pain everyday
Wondering if their will be a way
A way to end this pain alone
Before my life and dreams are overthrown
My life will always be in pain
Played and toyed with like a game
Life will always be the same
To us and to all it will never change
I hold a gun in my hand
Live or die I shall not Stand

Copyright © Lone ... [ 2003-04-14 10:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Life Eternal (User Rating: 1 )
by Lone_er on Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 07:18:30 PM AEST
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Keep writing. It helps tremdously with pain .Is an outlet and others will help by their own sharing of experiences.

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