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Array ( [sid] => 159787 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I wonder [time] => 2010-05-12 08:04:50 [hometext] => [bodytext] => When you held me you touched my very soul,
When you kissed me I finally started living,
When we made love it was two souls blending,
Into one utter devine being that would never come untwined.

The moment you touched me I knew you were the one,
Even though you turned away I lived on in hope,
Then unfortunately I moved on,
Only because I thought we had come undone.

I still thought of you so much,
Still wanted us to be ohhh so close,
They say that some often leaves foot prints in your heart,
Believe me you left a stampede in mine.

So often in my day I think of you,
The what if’s the maybe’s and the what might have been’s,
I doubt there is not a moment now during my day that I don’t think,
The way things could have been, the way things should have been.

For all the heart ache I am going through now,
I still wonder do you really love me,
And if you do what happened to us,
And the dream and the way things should be now.

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 22 [informant] => chrissylee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

I wonder

Contributed by chrissylee on Wednesday, 12th May 2010 @ 08:04:50 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

When you held me you touched my very soul,
When you kissed me I finally started living,
When we made love it was two souls blending,
Into one utter devine being that would never come untwined.

The moment you touched me I knew you were the one,
Even though you turned away I lived on in hope,
Then unfortunately I moved on,
Only because I thought we had come undone.

I still thought of you so much,
Still wanted us to be ohhh so close,
They say that some often leaves foot prints in your heart,
Believe me you left a stampede in mine.

So often in my day I think of you,
The what if’s the maybe’s and the what might have been’s,
I doubt there is not a moment now during my day that I don’t think,
The way things could have been, the way things should have been.

For all the heart ache I am going through now,
I still wonder do you really love me,
And if you do what happened to us,
And the dream and the way things should be now.

Copyright Â© chrissylee ... [ 2010-05-12 08:04:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I wonder (User Rating: 1 )
by guiltycircles on Wednesday, 12th May 2010 @ 06:20:11 PM AEST
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as someone who has recently been left, this really portrays those constant thoughts, and the desire to return to what was once so amazing... nice flow and honesty

Re: I wonder (User Rating: 1 )
by Daylynn_Van_Wyk on Thursday, 13th May 2010 @ 06:41:45 AM AEST
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My ultimate fear of getting into a serious relationship, winding up at the heartbreak hotel, i digg the poem, paintd a raw, honest picture of real-life situation in my mind.

Re: I wonder (User Rating: 1 )
by JimKoz on Sunday, 15th December 2013 @ 07:03:56 PM AEST
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I dig this!

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