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[sid] => 159862
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Leer
[time] => 2010-05-15 07:31:36
[hometext] => Fist poem. Not so good but please i need critisism so i can improve on my work. Thanks :]
[bodytext] => You’ve seen me tear, I’ve confessed you my fears You tell that with the years His voice I will not hear You throw at me a joke to get a steer, But you fail, and get no cheer My mind I cannot clear Because memories still appear Like him whispering in my ear, “I would never leave you my dear” He left me alone, hurting oh so severe, But like you said, “With the years, The pain will finally disappear.” All those tears are now left behind at the mere, And never looking back and letting my heart get sheered Happiness, Oh happiness please make your presence oh so near [comments] => 1 [counter] => 281 [topic] => 22 [informant] => fatalpath [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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