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Array ( [sid] => 15988 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => A Cheerleader Needs Help [time] => 2003-04-14 16:45:00 [hometext] => Please leave comments. Thanks. [bodytext] => She was a cheerleader. The captin. The best. Nobody could do what she could.
She was smart too. Her GPA was a 4.0. Every one asked her help. To anyone else, her life was perfect. She hides the truth well.
Her father touches her, he does bad things that he shouldn't do. She wants to tell somebody, especially her mom. But she is scared, scared that he will hurt her worse.
What should she do? Where should she go? These questions race through her mind as she holds the knife. Nobody can help me. Why live? She asked herself as she stabbed her heart. She bled. It was so thick, so red. She cried.
The back door opened, her mother rushed in. She screamed.
Her once, smart, beautiful daughter was now a corpse on her floor. She held her daughter until the ambulance arrived.
It was too late.
Now we stand here. Looking at her casket, we cry wishing we could've helped. Her mother cries alone, away from the crowd. She will miss her daughter forever, but sleep better at night because she knows her husband sleeps behind bars. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 277 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Desi [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
A Cheerleader Needs Help

Contributed by Desi on Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 04:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



She was a cheerleader. The captin. The best. Nobody could do what she could.
She was smart too. Her GPA was a 4.0. Every one asked her help. To anyone else, her life was perfect. She hides the truth well.
Her father touches her, he does bad things that he shouldn't do. She wants to tell somebody, especially her mom. But she is scared, scared that he will hurt her worse.
What should she do? Where should she go? These questions race through her mind as she holds the knife. Nobody can help me. Why live? She asked herself as she stabbed her heart. She bled. It was so thick, so red. She cried.
The back door opened, her mother rushed in. She screamed.
Her once, smart, beautiful daughter was now a corpse on her floor. She held her daughter until the ambulance arrived.
It was too late.
Now we stand here. Looking at her casket, we cry wishing we could've helped. Her mother cries alone, away from the crowd. She will miss her daughter forever, but sleep better at night because she knows her husband sleeps behind bars.




Copyright © Desi ... [ 2003-04-14 16:45:00]
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Re: A Cheerleader Needs Help (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 06:25:29 PM AEST
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This is so tragic. Very sad. You wrote this well.
Michelle


Re: A Cheerleader Needs Help (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 10:14:13 PM AEST
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If only she could have spoken up!
How Sad!
Very touching write! Christina


Re: A Cheerleader Needs Help (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomsLDY on Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 11:26:38 PM AEST
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It's sad that she had no one she could trust with her secret.


Re: A Cheerleader Needs Help (User Rating: 1 )
by perfection on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 07:35:15 PM AEST
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This is a very good write. It is tragic, and you really got me into it. Made me feel the feelings of the other people in it. Nice Job!
xoxo


Re: A Cheerleader Needs Help (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 06:56:22 PM AEST
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That's really sad, but very well written.




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