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[title] => Not so bad. -Real one
[time] => 2010-05-17 19:48:29
[hometext] => I really sorry i accidentally sent my rought draft... so lets try this again. This is my first (now second post) its dark in the beginning and then it gets better. I used blank and rhyming verse. Hope you enjoy, only 17 so dont hate :)
[bodytext] => I am the bringer of the eternal sleep. I am the reason why your sky goes black at night. I am the disorted picture in a violent lake. I creep where there is no chance of light. I feed off of fear where there is no compassion. I rule the kingdom of your fragile hearts. I, the first reason, brought nightmares and teared eyes. I am why you would ever look for a sunrise. You have fears, I Make Them Reality. My only protege are your chillbumps. For i had no life, yet i live in the everlasting death. My only pain, is that i can have no pain. You cannot hide where shadows don't exsist. Life isn't always so bliss. Pain will come, intentional or not. My effects are not to be forgot. There is a Heaven, so there is a Hell, place where the less fortuned dwell. Thats phase two, your on one. My resting place is where your thoughts first begun. Why do you think children scream at night? Why does my dark alleys fill you with fright? How you stop something that goes like the wind? People fight my war, to no end. For am I bad? I would think so. Put how to stop me, does anyone really know? Go ahead descibe me... For there is no description... How can you descripe, only knowing its intention... I am the absence of all that is made by love. Like how the dark is only warning of no light above. I am a scarecrow, as love is a dove. So how you get rid of me? Easy, Fill the world with Love. Or I am and will be your last and forever King. This is the world as we know it. Filled with hatred and sorrow. Its hard to see with the world so black. We need hope, to live for tomorrow So if you don't want to live life in desparity Go spread love, peace, hope, and charity. Make people dance and filled with glee. Joy, faithfullnes and prosperity One little kindness, to cure this polution. Your small action, is our biggest solution. -{The Upsidedown Thinker}- theupsidedownthinker, please: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit. This does not pertain to or include your own poems. That comment has been removed. Please also note that duplicate/multiple posts of the same poem are not allowed. Free memberships should please use the forum Poem Edit and Deletion Requests to have a poem edited or deleted. I have removed the other one as an exception. Please review site rules again. Thank you. Moderator_18 May 17, 2010 [comments] => 0 [counter] => 111 [topic] => 25 [informant] => theupsidedownthinker [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )
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